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A Touch of Your Hand

will you take my hand lead me not into your bedroom but into your heart a fire burns inside a desire for only you a desire for your love as much as i would love for you to take me into a world of passion i am a patient man and the aching inside my soul for your love is stronger than my want for your body i long to touch you but only with fingers of love a love that sends waves of tenderness into the very depths of you and sends ripples of excitement back into me for your heart will you take my hand lead me to you lead me into a true love that lust could never conquer passion could never quench a heart that could never betray could you do that with a touch of your hand

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Date: 5/8/2010 12:32:00 AM
this sounds so sweet.the sofest touch to the hand is a profound one.true love never changes, the passion will always remain the same. an i apologize for my late comment back, i usally comment back much faster.i look forward to reading more of your poems.i do hope to here from you, Travis. .(: -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/4/2010 12:36:00 PM
beautiful...wow beautiful is all i can say...
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Date: 4/29/2010 9:55:00 PM
I am gonna become a fan of yours for sure, Travis. Such sensitive poetry. Too bad all men can't "think" this way! Luv, andrea (if you wantn to see the pictures that inspired all the lovely haiku here at the site, go to Raul's bio or latest blog and click on his photo album there. You can see all the pictures he has used. I think they are still there!)
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:48:00 PM
thanks i am who i am and thats who ill ever be,,, i expect people too love me for me, not who they want me too be..lol
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:35:00 PM
thanks u for commenting my poem.. yea it is hard at times,, everyone feels that way,,, more than once in life.. i really am glad u like it,,, ur a great peot too.. always, miranda
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:25:00 PM
more romantic than most i know, nicely said,..p.d.
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Date: 4/29/2010 8:20:00 PM
Quite a passionate poem
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