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A Touch of Whimsy

Steal a bottle of champagne Revel in the delight of heat A touch of whimsy -- Of one’s reverie As if desirous to go anywhere Or somewhere in Africa The point of no return A combination of anything In high glee or river of woe Alas, either a thing or two Won ‘t change anything But a defining moment 06/05/16 Five Best Poems: Whimsy Like a Bee in a Bottle Africa and Others If I Could Change the World An Expressive Combination Longest words used: Whimsy Bottle Africa Change Combination Honorable mention in a contest by Timothy Hicks

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Date: 7/15/2016 6:24:00 AM
What a layout.....awesome!! Congrats Moon, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/15/2016 1:59:00 PM
Wow- Moon Flower -- excellent thoughts so cleverly expresses! To me, your poem flows so quickly and efficiently that it was over -- I was through it -- before I could realize it. Yet your words left their imprints and a good piece of advice to us all. Thanks for sharing such an all-around good piece of work! Byron
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Date: 6/10/2016 6:47:00 PM
ohh this is sooo cool, moon!..love it!..huggs
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Date: 6/10/2016 8:53:00 AM
Interesting write Moon Flower. I love the way the five words guide the content and flow of the piece.
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:06:00 PM
very cool poem you composed with your five words, Moon flower. congrats on HM
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Date: 6/9/2016 11:21:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Moon Flower - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2016 12:57:00 AM
Interesting train of thoughts here ... makes me contemplate how the small things in life can account for the biggest turning points. Cool title, too ... thanks for the read. Check out my blog, if you ever get the chance, and tell me about your poem :)
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Date: 6/5/2016 4:20:00 PM
Wonderful use of those five words, Sun. Not easy ones to use, but you wrote a great poem. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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