A Torrential Downpour

A torrential downpour 
on a bright and sunny day
as tears rained from her eyes;
Darkened shadows enveloped her
Although above her were cloudless skies

Sadness hits much harder
when all around you
is bright and gay;
A diagnosis of terminal cancer
Received on a summer’s day

She didn’t tell her husband
Or her children about the pain
She went to the doctors by herself
Hoping her worries were just in vain

The sun shines bright
Little children play
Flowers’ scents fill the air;
All alone
Contemplating what’s next
Her soul full of despair

A torrential downpour
On a bright and sunny day

She
    wipes
        her
            tears
                away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Prabhu Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 7:44 AM
heartfelt emotions... very well done.gr8 use of metaphors
Macfarlane Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 9:35 AM
A touching heartbreaking write...well done! Congrats on your win.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:30 PM
Congratulations on your win!! A sad image with beautiful mataphors. Blessings, Rhonda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:30 PM
*metaphors
Merryman Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Congrats on your win with this heart-wrenching poem, Joe! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in Susan's "Little Viewed Jewels" contest Joe. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:15 AM
Wow !! congratulations Joe
Taylor Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:03 AM
Wow, Congrats, Joe. Awesome write. Sad and strong. Great job. Ralph
Scholtz Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on this sad and powerful write Joe. Elizabeth
Quigley Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:37 AM
Wow Joe, this is gut wrenching. Powerful and full of emotion. Congratulations
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:34 AM
Joe congrats on your win, I missed this little gem first time around..David
Richards Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:34 AM
Such a powerful poem of fear, and one of the lonliest places one can find themselves to be in....it's a wow of a poem, Joe! Very profound. Good job!
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:58 AM
congrats Joe on a terrific first place win for this grand poetry luv..
Devonshire Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 12:04 PM
That second verse hits hard, Joe. To receive a diagnosis like this one on a day where everyone else seems to be so happy really adds to the pain. I hope your wife is doing better, Joe. I'm just holding on as long as I can and making every minute count. Love, Carolyn
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 7:56 PM
Very sad and touching but shows a strong women who is quite inspirational!
Merryman Avatar
January 24, 2012 at 6:27 PM
This is so sad. Well written, Joe. Love, Kim
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