Scribbler Of Verses Poet I do not know?

A Tormented Haze

in a haze of torment

a dozen thoughts raging within

helpless, lost

alone in the crowd

searching for that better way

for that less harsh day

and for that pristine, unattainable moment

when the torment and the strife and the rage and the sorrow and the loss and the wretchedness of the dark helplessness within

fades into nothingness

and vanishes into the distance

far, 

so very far away...

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Poet Destroyer A March 23, 2013 at 12:33 PM SCRIBBLER, congratulations with your awesome and wonderful poem. Always~ Linda Scribbler Of Verses March 23, 2013 at 2:31 PM Thank you very much, Linda :-) for your warmest words! It is wonderful to belong to a commonly shared space like Poetry Soup. Thanks again and peace and good wishes to you and all fellow super-Soup-ers ;-)

Debbie Guzzi March 22, 2013 at 7:05 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Scribbler Of Verses March 23, 2013 at 5:08 AM Thank you ever so kindly, Debbie! It is an honour, and a privilege to be a small part of this wonderful collective that is Poetry Soup. Keep well and warmest wishes!