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A Ton of Bricks

It hit me like a ton of bricks I realize I don't love you anymore I know its been coming I wished our love Was something That would last forever I realize That's in the past The strange thing is I'm relieved

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Date: 1/5/2020 9:05:00 AM
We can all relate, Timothy. Relationships take a life of their own. It's sad when people drift apart.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/6/2020 10:30:00 PM
It is, sometimes we come together for the wrong reasons at the wrong time. Maybe a great poet, like you, could write about that! Thank you Miss Line

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