Timothy Mcguire Poet Free verse

A Ton of Bricks

It hit me like a ton of bricks
I realize
I don't love you anymore
I know its been coming
I wished our love
Was something
That would last forever
I realize
That's in the past
The strange thing is
I'm relieved

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Line Gauthier January 5, 2020 at 9:05 AM We can all relate, Timothy. Relationships take a life of their own. It's sad when people drift apart. Timothy Mcguire January 6, 2020 at 10:30 PM It is, sometimes we come together for the wrong reasons at the wrong time. Maybe a great poet, like you, could write about that! Thank you Miss Line