Edward Ibeh Poet Tetractys

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A Toddler and Her Friends

She,
magnet;
attracting
half a dozen
of quacking, waddling ducks like scrap metal
A toddler is casting her magic spell
with mere bread crumbs;
a wondrous
sight to
see!


Double Tetractys Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Eve Roper
1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1 syllables
Checked at www.howmanysyllables.com
Photo chosen: 1
Date written: 08/18/2020

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Andrea Dietrich August 20, 2020 at 9:10 AM Love it! That duck picture sure is popular with poets. I have not seen anyone else yet who chose picture 2, like I did. Edward Ibeh August 20, 2020 at 4:18 PM Thank you, Andrea:-) Glad you love it! You chose the hardest option, I think.

Joanna Daniel August 20, 2020 at 7:14 AM Lovely imagery, Edward, magnetic indeed:) also thank you for my placement in your dizain contest:) Edward Ibeh August 20, 2020 at 4:20 PM You're quite welcome, Jo:-) I appreciate your comments and visit!

John Watt August 19, 2020 at 9:26 AM A charming poetic account of the image, I love the line "A toddler is casting her magic spell". Best wishes in the contest, Edward. ~ John Edward Ibeh August 19, 2020 at 2:38 PM Thank you very much, John:-) Stay blessed, my friend!