A Toddler

A toddler in a stroller passed And, looking at her face, It seemed to me that she was Merely staring into space. Which made me wonder – could it be She’d nothing on her mind? If not, and I could read her thoughts, What musings would I find? I wish I had a lollipop. I need some better toys. My pre-school class has way too many Mean and nasty boys. My lunch today was yucky. Why does Mommy have to work? And why did Daddy come home mad And call his boss a jerk? I know, I might be way off base. Perhaps within that stare Were thoughts of all the happy things She couldn’t wait to share.

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/28/2023 4:25:00 PM

This made me smile and smile. Toddlers can be wonderful. I've raised 3. They absorb so much more than we think they do. Their language development is wonderful to hear. Your third stanza was my absolute favorite. I think need a lollipop too! This was so funny and sweet. I think you are right on all counts.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/21/2023 5:52:00 PM

Oh, how whimsical my friend. I often think the same thing about animals. Definitely a favorite of mine. Have a great day, Ilene.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2023 3:34:00 PM

what a thought provoking piece Ilene, if only we could find out their thoughts! hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 9/21/2023 3:27:00 PM

It’s a strange lifelong thing for me… I’m not overly fond of kids… but they seem to adore me. I do adore this write, Ilene. That infantile stare can be empty headed, fascinated, or even devious (yup). It can say, ‘I want ice cream’ or ‘Yup, diaper deffo full’. Ahhh… innocence… fleeting….. very, very, very, fleeting.