A Toddler

A toddler in a stroller passed
And, looking at her face,
It seemed to me that she was
Merely staring into space.

Which made me wonder – could it be
She’d nothing on her mind?
If not, and I could read her thoughts,
What musings would I find?

I wish I had a lollipop.
I need some better toys.
My pre-school class has way too many
Mean and nasty boys.

My lunch today was yucky.
Why does Mommy have to work?
And why did Daddy come home mad
And call his boss a jerk?

I know, I might be way off base.
Perhaps within that stare
Were thoughts of all the happy things
She couldn’t wait to share.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 9/28/2023 4:25:00 PM
This made me smile and smile. Toddlers can be wonderful. I've raised 3. They absorb so much more than we think they do. Their language development is wonderful to hear. Your third stanza was my absolute favorite. I think need a lollipop too! This was so funny and sweet. I think you are right on all counts.
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Date: 9/21/2023 5:52:00 PM
Oh, how whimsical my friend. I often think the same thing about animals. Definitely a favorite of mine. Have a great day, Ilene.
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Date: 9/21/2023 3:34:00 PM
what a thought provoking piece Ilene, if only we could find out their thoughts! hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2023 3:27:00 PM
It’s a strange lifelong thing for me… I’m not overly fond of kids… but they seem to adore me. I do adore this write, Ilene. That infantile stare can be empty headed, fascinated, or even devious (yup). It can say, ‘I want ice cream’ or ‘Yup, diaper deffo full’. Ahhh… innocence… fleeting….. very, very, very, fleeting.
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