A Titanic Typa Love

Our love like the titanic, 
Our hearts what fueled it, 
A love so solid and strong, 
One that reflected a beauty, 
Loving you was a sail, 
Being loved by you was a cruise, 
The waters calm and blue like the love we knew, 
And then love you outgrew,
A cruise now shaken, 
The waters waved away our love, 
The titanic sinked away with our hearts 
But this love has marked its home,
Like the titanic forever remembered
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 8:09 PM
It is interesting, and the comparison of love to the Titanic was a brilliant idea.
Makotanyane Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 8:04 PM
Thank you very much. It warms my heart
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