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A Titanic Typa Love

Our love like the titanic, Our hearts what fueled it, A love so solid and strong, One that reflected a beauty, Loving you was a sail, Being loved by you was a cruise, The waters calm and blue like the love we knew, And then love you outgrew, A cruise now shaken, The waters waved away our love, The titanic sinked away with our hearts But this love has marked its home, Like the titanic forever remembered

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Date: 5/18/2018 8:09:00 PM
It is interesting, and the comparison of love to the Titanic was a brilliant idea.
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Bernice Makotanyane
Date: 5/19/2018 8:04:00 PM
Thank you very much. It warms my heart

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