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butterfly

“I knew the power of a single wish, after all. Invisible and inevitable, like a butterfly that beats its wings in one corner of the globe and with that single action changes the weather halfway across the world.” Alice Hoffman, The Ice Queen

 

A Tipping Balance

Pressure builds to the last straw
A butterfly unfolds its wings
Toes coil down on cliff's edge
The flippy flop flips to pause
In a coin tossed spins in the wind
Fate's fair is on hold in the air
For a tiny puff can
Blow out the candle
Or make the butterfly
Take to the air
Or send momentous whispers
in murmuring ripples that propagate
To shake the milieu
Not stir
Toppling happenstance over
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Ibeh Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 4:42 AM
John, a succinct piece that packs a punch. I enjoyed it. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Anderson Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes
Lawless Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 12:02 PM
YIKES!!!!! Excellent....and with a double oh seven reference.....a stinging twinge of humor
Anderson Avatar
March 18, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Thanks a lot ! Cheers
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