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A Tin Can’s Lament

There once was a man made of tin, Whose joints made a horrible din. “I need oil,” he’d plea, “Or a heart, possibly, But rust ruins romance again!”

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Date: 12/14/2024 12:56:00 PM
Oh No! That rust will do it every time (lol). Nicely done, Lunarya. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Happy holidays...Charlie :)
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