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A Timely Lift

The golden rule, to any fool
Is not a silly test
To shine the light
Of truth and right
Is worthy of our best

The earth and sky, may signify
The beauty in our soul
The mountain peak
That people seek
Is worthy of our goal

But what if we, are happily
The spirits we renew
The ones who pray
Along the way
For strength in what we do

To magnify, the reason why
We chose a hallowed birth
We must be true
And worthy too
To share a place on Earth

The spoken lie, or alibi
For hurting one another
Will not increase
A goodly peace
Or win a faithful brother

To feed the heart, we must impart
A monumental shift
In how we live
And how we give
The world a timely lift.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/23/2021 10:57:00 AM
Wonderful job, my friend. I see you mentioned Golden Rule same as I did. It's THE best rule on the earth. Congrats for your win
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Date: 5/23/2021 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations Bryan on your win. The last stanza truly hits the mark - "monumental shift." I have often thought if we live loving each other as we love ourselves, our lives would be so full there would be no time or space for anything but the positive influence of love. Blessings.
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Date: 5/23/2021 4:28:00 AM
It must be very difficult judging competitions - I don't envy anyone doing so and kudos to all who do - but I am going to say that amongst some very good poems in this particular competition your poem, Bryan, stands out as exceptional.
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Date: 5/23/2021 10:20:00 PM
True, Gary. Bryan’s words have a strong magnetic pull!
Date: 5/22/2021 11:24:00 PM
Bryan, thank you for sharing your outstanding poem, congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/22/2021 10:32:00 PM
'A Monumental Shift' Like 'Paradigm Shift' Very Good Idea.
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Date: 5/19/2021 7:19:00 AM
Bryan, you speak these truths well! God bless! Changing the world one person at a time!
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