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A Timely Lift

The golden rule, to any fool Is not a silly test To shine the light Of truth and right Is worthy of our best The earth and sky, may signify The beauty in our soul The mountain peak That people seek Is worthy of our goal But what if we, are happily The spirits we renew The ones who pray Along the way For strength in what we do To magnify, the reason why We chose a hallowed birth We must be true And worthy too To share a place on Earth The spoken lie, or alibi For hurting one another Will not increase A goodly peace Or win a faithful brother To feed the heart, we must impart A monumental shift In how we live And how we give The world a timely lift.

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Date: 5/23/2021 10:57:00 AM
Wonderful job, my friend. I see you mentioned Golden Rule same as I did. It's THE best rule on the earth. Congrats for your win
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Date: 5/23/2021 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations Bryan on your win. The last stanza truly hits the mark - "monumental shift." I have often thought if we live loving each other as we love ourselves, our lives would be so full there would be no time or space for anything but the positive influence of love. Blessings.
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Date: 5/23/2021 4:28:00 AM
It must be very difficult judging competitions - I don't envy anyone doing so and kudos to all who do - but I am going to say that amongst some very good poems in this particular competition your poem, Bryan, stands out as exceptional.
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Date: 5/23/2021 10:20:00 PM
True, Gary. Bryan’s words have a strong magnetic pull!
Date: 5/22/2021 11:24:00 PM
Bryan, thank you for sharing your outstanding poem, congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/22/2021 10:32:00 PM
'A Monumental Shift' Like 'Paradigm Shift' Very Good Idea.
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Date: 5/19/2021 7:19:00 AM
Bryan, you speak these truths well! God bless! Changing the world one person at a time!
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