Carrie Richards Poet Rhyme

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A Timeless Love

So young, we climbed a distant hill,

to carve a heart upon a tree.

Left in the bark, this love engraved

has aged with time, and so have we;

but can't erase the spark or thrill.



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8/3/15  For "Micropoetry" contest

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Andrea Dietrich August 7, 2015 at 9:38 PM Congrats, Carrie. Could swear I saw yours before but am not seeing my comment down here.

Sara Kendrick August 7, 2015 at 4:20 PM ((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK

James Inman August 7, 2015 at 8:37 AM Beautiful poem, Carrie.

Richard Lamoureux August 7, 2015 at 8:27 AM One of my favorites, congratulations.

Jan Allison August 7, 2015 at 4:41 AM Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley August 7, 2015 at 1:14 AM I'm faving this, it strikes a chord, Carrie. Thanks, Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 7, 2015 at 12:25 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write Carrie! Took me back in timeline!

Pandita Sietesantos August 6, 2015 at 11:55 PM Congratulations on your win, Carrie! Very beautiful write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita

Casarah Nance August 6, 2015 at 8:18 PM I thought that "left in the bark" was perfect for puppy love..whether it was intended or not this was cute! It did go over the character count for the contest, but I really did love it! Carrie Richards August 6, 2015 at 8:31 PM Thanks very much, Casarah.....Sorry if I counted wrong.....I will double check....I thought I had met the 140 requirement, . But thank you for the HM, and not eliminating :)

Ian Jones August 3, 2015 at 3:20 PM Absolutely beautiful. Good memories revisited are like warm honey to a sore throat. Absolute bliss. Kind regards, Ian

Jan Allison August 3, 2015 at 1:45 PM Simply delightful Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen August 3, 2015 at 1:38 PM - Sweet poem, Carrie :) - Good luck in contest ! - // Anne-Lise :)

Pam Deremer August 3, 2015 at 1:02 PM That's really nice. Thank you.