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A Time of Indifference

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We saw and yet ignored the evident mistake, being indifferent or perhaps well mannered, having nothing at stake. We saw and yet ignored, what the verse left unsaid; thinking but not feeling, captive to pace of life ~ sign of being ill-bred. We saw and yet ignored soft whispers beckoning, for our soul’s not yet stirred by love for love yearning, till time of reckoning. We saw and yet ignored the cry for an embrace, for heart’s not awakened to pulsations of love, we each imbibe as grace. 26-April-2022

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Date: 4/26/2022 1:24:00 AM
Alas, I feel so much like this poem. An indifferent attitude to life. Too much medication.
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Date: 4/26/2022 4:32:00 AM
Be like the zing in your poems!
Date: 4/25/2022 10:41:00 PM
Once in the comfort zone, it is so easy to ignore. Interesting poetry, one for the readers active mind.
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Date: 4/26/2022 2:42:00 AM
Thank you

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