A Time For Us, Again

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*Image of Discover by Pixabay. A Time For Us, Again Traipsing sunbeams pivots slothfully to moon gleams, steeped profound shadows to vivid flirtatious shades, albeit, daylight or twilight, a time for us exists always, feelings of our yesterdays, nothing begin tomorrows, views from each other draped in unforgettable smiles, chats slip to small talks, idle steps drifts to wandering, tad forward bit behind till side-by-side our hands held, tight grips grin senses, embrace progress the moment, heads tilt lips touch the fullness of each other's breath, taste the sweetness of the other's soul, now be it blink, wink or reopened eyes is blissfully kept locked away in, hearts tender beat occasions itself time and time again. 2020 August 16 *1st Place* A Time For Us ~~JCB Burl: Judged 2020 August 27

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 8/28/2020 9:51:00 AM

Congratulations, William. Great word-smithing. I liked "a time for us exists always."

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/28/2020 10:04:00 AM

Carol, I am truly thankful for your astute assessment and share, stay safe and well my friend, Aloha! William

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/27/2020 9:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win William! Great memories for me from 40 years ago!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 9:29:00 AM

Thanks my friend, Krish, glad you enjoyed these sentiments of 40 years ago, Aloha! William

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/27/2020 8:20:00 AM

The game of love when both parties are winning. Drawn with your observant eye. Your poems are a gift. Deserved top Win, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/27/2020 9:25:00 AM

My dutiful friend, a joy as always, enjoy your day, Sigrid, Aloha! William