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A Three Wheel Bike For Oldsters

So it's back to the days when I was a wee one Bought a three wheel bike for oldsters, what fun Now don't you guys laugh When they write my epitaph It'll say, “This old geezer was not to be outdone” © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/19/2015 11:46:00 PM

This could be a big hit!! I can just imagine a bunch of older people writing three wheeled bicycles everywhere. Funny one : D Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 8:00:00 AM

You are excused for your minor typo... your writing is impeccable, beyond reproach! As far as riding my three wheeler, I feel a bit goofy, so I ride early in the morning when less people can see me!!! LOL Love, Jack xxx

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 7/19/2015 11:46:00 PM

riding* My bad : D

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/19/2015 10:12:00 AM

You two are so cool.. because of your competition... and your crazy 'Joy of Life'. Put it together and it spells... FUN! Sic en Tigers!... REALLY! Honest! PS. Grandpa Troll says he'll be waiting for more... And you don't want to dissapoint a Troll... Now, Do You? LOL...