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A Thousand Hours In the Day

cascading waterfall of moments slow to a trickle. time crawls along like a tortoise. punishing, the lingering ennui she feels; a thousand hours in the day. Date written: 06/11/2022

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Date: 7/6/2022 7:19:00 AM
Well done! Enjoyed.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/6/2022 3:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sherry:-)
Date: 6/30/2022 3:54:00 PM
This is a stunning poem, Dear Edward! A Fave for me - it made me marvel about the past moments of my life!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/30/2022 8:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mala:-) I appreciate the fave, my friend.
Date: 6/17/2022 8:36:00 PM
So beautifully expressed, and felt. Congrats on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/30/2022 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara:-)
Date: 6/17/2022 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Edward!! Your imagery is awesome, extremely visual and visceral. How many times have we felt the minutes crawl? Wonderfully expressed. A very deserving win. A fav for me. Blessings of happy hours to you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/17/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and fave, Sam:-)
Date: 6/15/2022 3:27:00 PM
Excellent work Edward. Congratulations on your deserving Second place win. Blessings xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/15/2022 5:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie:-)
Date: 6/15/2022 10:39:00 AM
Well done Edward. Enjoyed the read and sentiment.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/15/2022 5:00:00 PM
Thanks very much, Lonna:-)
Date: 6/15/2022 8:49:00 AM
Woah....nice one Edward....Congrats on your win:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/15/2022 4:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Carol:-)
Date: 6/11/2022 12:56:00 PM
Feels melancholy---time hangs on--languishing in pain.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/11/2022 4:35:00 PM
Thanks very much for the visit, Vijay:-)

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