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A Thoughtful Poem

A thoughtful poem: find words, my prey-
All other things are pushed away.
While tracking them down with my heart
Exploring, finding the right part-
The chase can lead night into day.

Best words or lovely phrase to say
What's tugging at my heart today,
Are all I need to quick jumpstart-
A thoughtful poem.

The meter, rhyme, without delay
Await the treasured words while they,
As captured prey, become the art-
March to my tune and soon impart
The imageries that will convey-
A thoughtful poem.


July 22, 2019
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Walker Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your placement. I picked up a play on words within your "thoughtful poem." An enjoyable poem to read. ~ Sonia
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 2:19 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your well deserved placement.
Haight Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 11:52 AM
Thank you again, Subimal, for your visit and supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra
Messina Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Beautiful poem Sandra. Unfortunately in your line " A thoughtful poem, find words..my prey" there are 9 syllables. Thanks for entering my contest. Hugs Charlie
Haight Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 9:43 AM
Oh, Charles! That word 'poem' sometimes slips by in my mind as one syllable instead of two! At least I counted it correctly in the other two lines! Thanks for the nice contest and for the HM! Hugs, Sandra
Inman Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 8:57 PM
Wonderful write Sandra, I don't know if anything is left in me to create a thoughtful poem.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 3:59 PM
Oh, sad to hear that, James! Thank you for your nice visit and positive comment. Hope your creativity is on the mend! Sandra :)
Parker Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 4:32 PM
a very thoughtful poem with insight...good luck
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Thank you very much, Frederic! I value your positive comment! Sandra :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 12:46 PM
Hello Sandra Haight, this is a delightful poem. I enjoyed reading. have a nice day my friend.
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 4:01 PM
Thank you so much, Darlene, for reading my poem and sending lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
Michael Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Calling on the muse...Nice one...
Haight Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Arturo, with your supportive comment. Sandra :)
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