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A Thin Blue Ribbon

seamless gravitas 
       buoyant in its thin repose-  
                symbiotic bliss
every breath gleans earth’s release  
      manna from a mother’s sigh  

                 12 May 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/24/2016 1:28:00 AM
Awesome win, David.
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Date: 6/5/2016 9:10:00 PM
David, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/5/2016 9:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:18:00 PM
David, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-Luloo
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:05:00 PM
SWEET tanka, David. I dig your thinking and form:), peace. jill
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