David Mohn Poet Tanka

A Thin Blue Ribbon

seamless gravitas 
       buoyant in its thin repose-  
                symbiotic bliss
every breath gleans earth’s release  
      manna from a mother’s sigh  

                 12 May 2016

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Skat A July 24, 2016 at 1:28 AM Awesome win, David.

Eve Roper June 5, 2016 at 9:10 PM David, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Seosamh De Burca June 5, 2016 at 9:07 PM Congrats on your win.

Beautiful Scars June 5, 2016 at 7:18 PM David, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-Luloo

Jill Spagnola May 12, 2016 at 8:05 PM SWEET tanka, David. I dig your thinking and form:), peace. jill