A THEORY OF CREATION’S ERROR

Shredded into fragments,
mistaken for beauty—
a towering aberration
bred in covenant with god,
an unholy union.

Immaculate conception rewrites
the geometry of order.
The primordial gods witness it—
and something ancient in them breaks.

War arrives
where silence should have ruled.

A consummation of man and divinity
splinters the sacred spine of civilization.

A lineage without origin,
a design without restraint—
humanity diagramming its own collapse.

How did it come to this?

A mirror once held before God
caught a fracture of light—
a spark mistaken for permission.

From that error
something is carried down:
a stolen architecture
dragged through the conduits of heaven.

It was never meant to descend.

In human hands,
such knowledge refines itself
into a quieter form of extinction—
polished, patient, almost tender.

It learns to laugh
as it erases.

Until only dust remains
with voices inside it saying:

men lived here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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