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A Thanksgiving Memory

A warm fuzzy thought in a golden globe of yesterday shrimp cocktail white wine roast turkey with stuffing green beans amandine glazed carrots creamy mashed potatoes gravy rolls pecan pie mile high strawberry pie coffee Her menu written out on a small square from a white rectangular notepad In a thoughtful script Black pen strokes All caps She carried out the order with brutal precision And by mealtime seated at the Head of the Table to my left All eyes turned inward She plucked the praise from our mouths before we had time to savor the flavor of her labor And it was good So very good Afterwards she crept into the Smallest recesses of her Soul hoping no one would scold her for being so good so very good Thank you for all the wonderful meals, Mama.

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Date: 11/29/2014 9:29:00 PM
A nice write Patricia, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 11/29/2014 6:07:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Patricia - I choose your first lovely and well written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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