A Texas Critic
This here’s a poem, ‘bout writin’ one,
‘Bout how it sounds, and havin’ fun,
I like the rhythm, and I like the rhyme,
Whether quickly read, or three four time,
I guess you’d say, I like things neat,
I like all lines, to follow the beat,
Now I’ve read some, they tell a story,
The writin’ I read, was sorta gory,
It needs redoin’, and with more thought,
No rhyme No rhythm, it aint naught.
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