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A Tender Petal

a tender petal dreams of becoming flower before a hailstorm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Monterey Sirak
Date: 3/7/2015 7:06:00 AM
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Stunning haiku! Makes me think of a young girl's dreams before life's harsh lessons.
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A. H. Sewell
Date: 3/6/2015 8:55:00 PM
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Lovely Haiku, Rajat :)
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Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/5/2015 12:36:00 PM
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Wow! This is awesome, Rajat I'm thinking a young bride-to-be is excited for proposal, but she doesn't know what marrying such guy entails. Then again, what comes to mind, is the inevitability of rain on parades. This haiku is simply beautiful in its own way.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/5/2015 12:15:00 PM
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so sad are the dreams that cannot come true...a lovely, poignant haiku, Rajat...hugs, Rhonda
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Kp Nunez
Date: 3/5/2015 11:06:00 AM
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dreamy haiku..love it Rajat.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 3:47:00 AM
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soft so soft Rajat. :)!
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/4/2015 12:12:00 PM
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Great pen Rajat! Wow! the imagery of this haiku is astounding my dear friend. Deep stuff here. I have to let you know that I believe that you're very good at this surreal- kind of haikus. Amazing visuals! A 7 from me! Have a lovely day! In his light! God bless! :) D."
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/4/2015 11:54:00 AM
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A dream of a Haiku, dear Rajat. L ove my friend.
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Paul Callus
Date: 3/4/2015 10:51:00 AM
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I like the visual, Rajat. Hope it moves fast before her dreams get crushed. // paul
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Maverick Nyambu
Date: 3/3/2015 10:23:00 PM
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Brilliant Rajat!!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/3/2015 10:13:00 PM
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Good work! Perhaps a senryu..at any rate its great. BG
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/3/2015 10:13:00 PM
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Good work! Perhaps a senryu..at any rate its great. BG
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/3/2015 2:59:00 PM
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Wonderful imagery in your haiku, Rajat! A 7 from me! :)
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David Meade
Date: 3/3/2015 2:32:00 PM
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I love this haiku -- such beauty exposed to such harsh conditions . . . but their is hope!! Much love dear friend. 7 fav
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/3/2015 2:16:00 PM
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Yes, and she needs to grow thick skin for those hail stones!
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