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A Tender Moment From Childhood

Mother had throat cancer Food pipe blocked, could not swallow She would struggle with a bowl of food and tears in eyes Desperately try to eat Unsuccessful, would drink water or milk She became very weak One day friend told her "Why don't you put a pipe in food pipe? Then, you can eat. I know someone who has done it" On the day of operation, I vividly remember I was getting ready for school, she was combing my hair I told her "Plait is very loose." "I lack strength" she replied I didn't say anything, I understood Prayed her suffering would end. That was the last conversation I had with her She died during operation. Although I cried inconsolably deep within I was happy for her Her suffering had finally ended. We never had a maid or domestic help Despite ill health, she did everything on her own Still, when she died, many maids and poor around cried She had touched their life in positive way 13.06.2021 For A Tender Moment From Childhood, Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Date: 6/15/2021 10:55:00 AM
Human is so helpless. Though Medical Science is progressing. I feel your ache. Love.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/15/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thanks. Take care, God bless!
Date: 6/13/2021 8:22:00 AM
This story touched my heart, because I, too, lost my mother when I was a teenager. Her love shined through in so many ways, Rama.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/13/2021 8:40:00 AM
True, mothers love shines through in many ways, unforgettable memories.
Date: 6/13/2021 7:05:00 AM
This is a moving story. I feel so bad for your loss but I understand your compassion and being thankful her suffering ended. Hugs Rick.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 6/13/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thanks. Take care, God bless!

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