A Tender Moment From Childhood

A loving beautiful mother,
A responsibly caring father,
A bit moody, yet, affectionate sister,
And me the Very Important member;
All I can imagine is a beautiful tree,
Our home was just like a nest on it. 
We were like sparrows carefree, happy,
Praying, playing, sharing, caring…
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It was then the terrible tempest blew.
As though just to destroy our nest!
‘Cardiac arrest’, they said.
My mother died on the way to the hospital. 
I was three and unaware of many events.
Except the wailing and weeping;
All I could remember most is -
That scene of my father holding me,
And showing my mother in the tomb,
Shedding streams of tears and telling me:
‘This is your mother. See here for the last time.
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Ours is a nuclear family, 
My father had now dual responsibility.
Uncles and aunts convinced him,
And almost haunted him to remarry…
“I will not”, he said, “I will live for my kids,
Joys or pains – I will share with them every bit.”
These words he kept up
Till the end of his death
His highest moment of contemplation, 
Was just lying on my mother’s tomb…
Thus crying and wailing and weeping 
When I was just eight he went away too. 
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Though I feel I have cried enough,
For my father’s death later;
And my tears are now amply dried,
Thinking of and thanking his love and care;
Though time has cured much of my wounds,
The scene of my paternal uncle,
Shedding streams of tears and telling me:
‘This is your father. See him for the last time.
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Tears Brim-fill my eyes even today… 



09 June 2021
A Tender Moment From Childhood Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Date: 12/26/2021 9:42:00 AM
It's a testament to the love your parents had for you, and you for them-- why God does what He does, I cannot always understand, but your uncle was wrong--you will see them again--love never goes away, which was the last thing my mother said to me before she passed.
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Date: 7/2/2021 11:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Yes, WOW!!! What a story/write. Your pen was working overtime. So sorry for all of the pain. Life seems to be filled with pain. Have a blessed day with your win...................
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Date: 7/1/2021 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this touching poem. BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/1/2021 7:55:00 PM
Thank you very much. I have no words to thank you for giving me this opportunity.
Date: 7/1/2021 2:45:00 PM
Wow, what a powerful poem of love and loss that you pen so deftly, Christuraj. Death of loved ones at such a young age is truly life changing. The emotions come through so strongly..thanks for sharing and congrats on your win.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/1/2021 7:56:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/12/2021 4:26:00 AM
I feel your grief in this emotive work. Death is hard and much more so for a child who does not fully understand its concept until later. What you have experienced follows us to the grave even if we are able to talk about it. Thanks for your visits to my page. Sara
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/13/2021 12:51:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/11/2021 12:03:00 AM
I have no word to console. Can't imagine how you two sisters were raised up. Can't imagine how life turns so ruthless. Love n Blessings.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/11/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/9/2021 10:38:00 PM
Ohh, it must have been hard to lose both parents at such a young age!! You have written from your heart, Christuraj:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/10/2021 12:15:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/9/2021 8:31:00 PM
Very few can overcome such moment of life... You did.. Thanks for giving me an opportunity to read such a great piece of your feelings.... Your words... Your poem.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/9/2021 10:24:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/9/2021 7:52:00 PM
Painful beyond measure, when fate snatches away our near ones. Yet, we treasure moments of tenderness, of love, rising again to the heavens
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Date: 6/9/2021 10:24:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/9/2021 11:30:00 AM
I was so moved by your sad verses that goose bumps erupted. I am truly sorry that you had such terrible loses in your childhood. Your story is one of melancholia, well told.
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Date: 6/9/2021 10:23:00 PM
Thank you very much.
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