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A Tender Goodbye

The brave son goes off to war visions of victory in his eyes His father mouths a tender goodbye turns away ~ breaks down and cries ________________________________ Talked to my son, who was on the Gaza border, just before his phone was locked up and he went into combat.

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Date: 11/2/2023 3:13:00 PM
I was brought to tears and silence when I read your poem. The situation and the waiting must be difficult, almost torturous at times. My heart goes out to you and your family. Sending prayers. Sara
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2023 7:12:00 PM
I'm lucky. I lived in high-tension times in Israel 45 years ago, during the last days of the old socialist labor unions heading up the (lack of) utilities. So nobody had a phone, including me. I didn't call home one time during 16 months. So I'm used to the silence. It's driving my wife crazy. Lucky me.
Date: 11/2/2023 3:39:00 AM
Gershon, as Milton said "they also serve who only stand and wait" But that waiting can be a painful eternity.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2023 7:00:00 PM
Waiting is the spice of life, as no one every says...
Date: 11/2/2023 2:39:00 AM
Oh Gershon l can’t even imagine how hard this must be for you and the family. I just don’t what to say as no words can take the worry away. Just sending love your way my friend and the biggest cuddle! Debxx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2023 6:55:00 PM
Thanks for everything, Deb. Don't worry. It only gets harder now... ~ Hard times for my Hard Hat
Date: 11/2/2023 12:39:00 AM
Alveinu Malkeinu! Shalom Bas Noa’ch!
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Date: 11/2/2023 6:48:00 PM
Thanks. That helps! ~ Shulem Lemmer
Date: 11/1/2023 9:52:00 PM
Oh I can not imagine! You must stay prayed up and do your best to not worry yourself sick. I KNOW I would. Such a hard thing to face. My heart goes out to you. Hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2023 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Karen. It is rough now. And the road ahead is rougher. Faith and Strength, Gershon
Date: 11/1/2023 8:10:00 PM
My heart breaks…
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/1/2023 8:22:00 PM
I trust in God, but I'm human. The heart is very heavy tonight... Please know: Prayers, Charity, and a Civil Tongue are the best weapons we can employ from overseas. Thank you for your empathy. Faith and Strength, Gershon

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