A Tender Goodbye

The brave son goes off to war
     visions of victory in his eyes

   His father mouths a tender goodbye
     turns away ~ breaks down and cries



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   Talked to my son, who was on the Gaza
   border, just before his phone was locked
   up and he went into combat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lawless Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 3:39 AM
Gershon, as Milton said "they also serve who only stand and wait" But that waiting can be a painful eternity.
Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Waiting is the spice of life, as no one every says...
M  Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 2:39 AM
Oh Gershon l can’t even imagine how hard this must be for you and the family. I just don’t what to say as no words can take the worry away. Just sending love your way my friend and the biggest cuddle! Debxx
Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Thanks for everything, Deb. Don't worry. It only gets harder now... ~ Hard times for my Hard Hat
Romios Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 12:39 AM
Alveinu Malkeinu! Shalom Bas Noa’ch!
Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Thanks. That helps! ~ Shulem Lemmer
Jones Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 9:52 PM
Oh I can not imagine! You must stay prayed up and do your best to not worry yourself sick. I KNOW I would. Such a hard thing to face. My heart goes out to you. Hugs
Wolf Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Karen. It is rough now. And the road ahead is rougher. Faith and Strength, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 8:10 PM
My heart breaks…
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 8:22 PM
I trust in God, but I'm human. The heart is very heavy tonight... Please know: Prayers, Charity, and a Civil Tongue are the best weapons we can employ from overseas. Thank you for your empathy. Faith and Strength, Gershon
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