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A Telling Sign

gleaming in the sky at the infancy of dawn a bright morning star right then I knew my prayer for a good day was answered Submitted for... Tanka Poetry Contest Sponsored by M.L. Kiser Date written: 05/29/2021

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Date: 6/7/2021 2:58:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/7/2021 5:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Date: 6/4/2021 5:25:00 PM
big congrats, Edward. I see it placed rather high, as it deserved to.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/4/2021 6:25:00 PM
Thank you very much for the visits and comments, Andrea:-)
Date: 6/4/2021 4:45:00 PM
I like this, Edward! Great tanka! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/4/2021 6:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim:-)
Date: 6/3/2021 3:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Edward , in M.L Tanka poetry contest. Enjoyed reading this beautiful poem thank our good Lord. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2021 7:02:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and congrats, Eve:-)
Date: 6/3/2021 10:12:00 AM
Beautiful Image. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2021 7:03:00 PM
Thank you very much, Christuraj:-)
Date: 6/3/2021 10:00:00 AM
Light, joy and hope all captured in your image of "infancy of dawn!" Wonderful image and metaphor! It is truly amazing how God speaks to us in the simplest routines of nature. This is a joyful morning shout of faith Edward. Congratulations on your win. Blessings for your day.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2021 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and congrats, Sam:-) Blessings to you, too, my friend!
Date: 6/3/2021 9:51:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on a win that I already predicted with this mesmerizing Tanka, blessings and regards dear Edward
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2021 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad:-) I appreciate it.
Date: 6/3/2021 8:44:00 AM
Nicely done, beautiful piece.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/3/2021 7:06:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement and the wonderful feedback, M.L.!:-)
Date: 6/1/2021 8:09:00 PM
Sparkling tanka, Edward! Nice contest entry. Light and Joy, Gershon
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/2/2021 3:49:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gershon:-)
Date: 6/1/2021 5:02:00 PM
Seeing this one again , I like it even more. Sure hope it places.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/2/2021 3:48:00 AM
Thanks again! I appreciate your revisit, Andrea:-)
Date: 6/1/2021 9:30:00 AM
Yeah, I can feel it, nice tanka, Edward:) should do well:)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/1/2021 1:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Jo:-)
Date: 5/30/2021 1:24:00 PM
that would be a lovely moment to feel. Well done!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/30/2021 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea:-)
Date: 5/30/2021 4:27:00 AM
A moment beautifully captured!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/30/2021 5:18:00 AM
Thank you very much, Vijay:-)
Date: 5/29/2021 11:56:00 AM
Hi Edward, you penned a great Tanka, very inspiring with great wording and symbolism, my best wishes for the contest. Blessings and best regards
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/29/2021 1:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad:-) Blessings to you as well, my friend!

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