A Teen Who Became An Adult

Dad, had you been more faithful as you were in youth
and much devoted to mom, God would have opened wide
His door and blessed you, not punishing you with strife...
but the burden weighted on me feeling the scorn and wrath.


I grew up with a lack of paternal affection,
no hugs, no encouragement left alone and sad...
it was very hard to get confidence and feel ambition;
I could have leaned on his shoulder and be very glad!


Hope was never lost, I looked to Heaven
and He consoled me in times of endless fear and turmoil,
He was a Father I could confide in and lean on;
why was my dad so restless and chose to live in Hell? 


Dad, my youthful days would have been brighter and without tears,
immensely cherishing the happiness of two happy parents;
unfortunately, it couldn't be realized due to the shameless lust
for your mistress imposing responsibility on a teen who became an adult.  



Entered in Frank Herrera's contest,
" Coming Of Age "
Written by Andrew Crisci
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 11:50 AM
It not eacy to be a teen and neither parents.Touching poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise (now grandma)Good luck in contest!!
Venkataraman Avatar
February 16, 2012 at 9:23 AM
Dear Andrew Crisci, Even that greatest tennis player After getting divorced from wife Is only taking care of the kids, His love was so strong and fine. I understand your weak emotions, That is God's plan my dear child, Your anxiety is by me understood, But, to compensate, love your mom Shower her with hugs and kisses, Embrace her by kindly handling her, Touch her feet and remove aches, God and Jesus will be at your side. Your poem is indeed extraordinary, What a great talent you possess! Just develop it and continue living, Great achievements can be made. Yours prayerfully, mvvenkataraman
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