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A Teary Farewell

The high-pitched sound of steel on steel screeches where the tracks meet the wheel. The train station seems somewhat stark as shifting shadows stalk the dark. The train rumbles in, and she tries to be brave, yet she softly cries. Taking my hand in hers, she smiles and says love can stretch many miles. We found love while on vacation, but will it last past this station? She clings to me like morning dew, and yet, there's nothing we can do. The conductor calls out, "last call," as the Night dons a misty shawl. And we rush a teary farewell, as the train whistles, time's death knell. I see her wave a sad goodbye that breaks my heart and makes me cry. And as the train increases speed, I pray that God will intercede.
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:47 PM
I don't know where to start, You really drew us in, emotions felt, "will it last past this station. " You just have a way with words, always look forward to your next win, always so well deserved. Congrats my friend.
Pinet Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:03 PM
Thanks, Barbara, I appreciate your comments, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Peck Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 1:48 PM
Oh, I hope God did intervene! Goodbyes are so hard. Your poem is poignant yet hopeful, and very lovely. Congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:02 PM
Thanks, Ann, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Such a lovely write, Emile, with the sounds of life ongoings. Congratulations on your win. Many Blessings friend
Pinet Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Drowley Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Excellent write. Congratulations on your win!
Pinet Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:50 AM
Thanks, David, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Calasibetta Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 3:59 AM
Stunning! A well deserved win in the contest. The power of your first stanza drew me in and wowed me throughout. Congratulations! :)Paulette
Pinet Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:05 AM
Thanks, Paulette, I appreciate your comments, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Perfecto! Again, you pen just the right thoughts and sentiments, my friend Emile. Best of luck in the contest.
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 6:01 PM
Thanks, Milt, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Venkataraman Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 4:24 AM
I saw a film titled "love bug" in which the car will do miracles and its owner will make many adventures through it. Here you love the train and thank it and feel sorry for leaving. Amazing rhyme scheme and a totally new theme. All the best!
Pinet Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Thanks, My, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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