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The high-pitched sound of steel on steel screeches where the tracks meet the wheel. The train station seems somewhat stark as shifting shadows stalk the dark. The train rumbles in, and she tries to be brave, yet she softly cries. Taking my hand in hers, she smiles and says love can stretch many miles. We found love while on vacation, but will it last past this station? She clings to me like morning dew, and yet, there's nothing we can do. The conductor calls out, "last call," as the Night dons a misty shawl. And we rush a teary farewell, as the train whistles, time's death knell. I see her wave a sad goodbye that breaks my heart and makes me cry. And as the train increases speed, I pray that God will intercede.

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Date: 7/14/2022 4:47:00 PM
I don't know where to start, You really drew us in, emotions felt, "will it last past this station. " You just have a way with words, always look forward to your next win, always so well deserved. Congrats my friend.
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:03:00 PM
Thanks, Barbara, I appreciate your comments, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/14/2022 1:48:00 PM
Oh, I hope God did intervene! Goodbyes are so hard. Your poem is poignant yet hopeful, and very lovely. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:02:00 PM
Thanks, Ann, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/14/2022 12:54:00 PM
Such a lovely write, Emile, with the sounds of life ongoings. Congratulations on your win. Many Blessings friend
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:01:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/14/2022 9:43:00 AM
Excellent write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/14/2022 9:50:00 AM
Thanks, David, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/13/2022 3:59:00 AM
Stunning! A well deserved win in the contest. The power of your first stanza drew me in and wowed me throughout. Congratulations! :)Paulette
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Date: 7/13/2022 7:05:00 AM
Thanks, Paulette, I appreciate your comments, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2022 10:38:00 AM
Perfecto! Again, you pen just the right thoughts and sentiments, my friend Emile. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/6/2022 6:01:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, it is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/6/2022 4:24:00 AM
I saw a film titled "love bug" in which the car will do miracles and its owner will make many adventures through it. Here you love the train and thank it and feel sorry for leaving. Amazing rhyme scheme and a totally new theme. All the best!
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Date: 7/6/2022 8:17:00 AM
Thanks, My, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

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