A Tearful Return

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You return with tears in your eyes, a child again Whom was fed thus rattling the heart in the womb then This day's clothing has vanished from his grasp Otherwise, he's hunting a poor soul in his chest hasp If you are afraid of distance, the vastness is simple Because soul-to-soul contact is a worthy wimble Written: January 16, 2022

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/17/2022 2:47:00 AM

Such a lovely picture and the idea of soul to soul contact.

Valsa George

Date: 1/16/2022 5:33:00 PM

In soul to soul contact, distance never becomes a hindrance ! Love the image of the golden marigolds !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/16/2022 11:04:00 AM

Those blossoms in your photo are awesome, Lasaad. I hear the voice of pain and feel the tears in your words.