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A Tearful Heart

"A tearful heart is like a rainy cloud" - by Poet A heart full of tears is like a cloud filled with rain, drenched in sorrow, it can't be consoled by a song, at times it drizzles, sometimes it pours out in pain, melancholy cannot be hid inside for long; Salty drops drip drip drip from misty eyes of grief, in a heart numbed by pain, woes do not go away; When the Grim Reaper strikes, it's hard to find relief, like the unrelenting rain on a cloudy day; Emotions flood fast in a lone, suffering mind, like the harsh pitter patter of heavy cloudburst; A heart can only take as much as is destined, the rest of its troubles overflow unrehearsed; The heart's agony, only few can understand; Like falling sleets of rain, heartache can pierce the soul, such acute distress goes deep, it's tough to withstand, when the sad sky showers, waterworks take its toll; A heart full of tears is like a cloud filled with rain, salty drops drip drip drip from misty eyes of grief, emotions flood fast in a lone, suffering mind, the heart's agony, only few can understand. 12.09.2020
For Constance La France's "My created form: Rhyme4 Mix" contest

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Date: 12/20/2020 1:10:00 PM
just beautifully sad, loved it...Congrats sweet Jo :) -luloo
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Date: 12/19/2020 12:12:00 PM
Lovely piece Jo, nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Love your quote as it's really wise saying. Take care, blessings,Gordon
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Date: 12/15/2020 4:02:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your win in my Created Form- Rhyme4-Mix Contest with this excellent poem, I like your quote too and I like your image _Constance
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Date: 12/15/2020 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and sign. I love it. Your line, "A tearful heart is like a rainy cloud" is so true. Enjoy your win with blessings............
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Date: 12/13/2020 6:57:00 PM
Hi Jo, Your quote works so well written write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a good evening:-)Alexis
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Date: 12/9/2020 5:29:00 AM
Your opening line says it all--wonderfully articulated--emotions bleed throughout.
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Date: 12/9/2020 3:15:00 AM
This is a gripping, penetrating poem. I feel it's heartbreak resonating through the emotions. It's melancholy enriched with feelings of sorrow, chilling the senses with these painful raindrops... a cloudburst of emotional thunder claps. Love this friend,. Such a blessing to read and feel. God bless you
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Date: 12/9/2020 1:26:00 AM
Loved your metaphoric write. Best for a win. ~~
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