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A Teared Eye

Remember? Do you remember me? Trapped in your ice cave, no sunlight, no one to see? Daylight drowns out the dark. Sunlight heals your scars I remember I said a prayer for you I remember all the nights and the days Trying to find you, trying to find a way Remember? It was just you and me! Cold eyes, still nowhere to see? Do you remember? What we said? A goodbye? A teared eye! But I remember the look in your eyes Alive......but you were already dead!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/20/2018 4:58:00 PM
Such a deep dramatic verse!! Bravo!! Was such a thrill to read..
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Date: 5/23/2018 5:16:00 PM
Hi Robertina, Thanks very much, glad you liked it. Cheers, Tiro

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