A Teared Eye

Remember?

Do you remember me?

Trapped in your ice cave, no sunlight, no one to see?

Daylight drowns out the dark. 
Sunlight heals your scars

I remember 

I said a prayer for you

I remember all the nights and the days

Trying to find you, trying to find a way

Remember?

It was just you and me!

Cold eyes, still nowhere to see?

Do you remember?

What we said?

A goodbye? A teared eye!

But I remember the look in your eyes

Alive......but you were already dead!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May 20, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Such a deep dramatic verse!! Bravo!! Was such a thrill to read..
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May 23, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Hi Robertina, Thanks very much, glad you liked it. Cheers, Tiro
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