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"a Teardrop"

Tears trickle down slow over my cheeks lightly and sad as drops fall from chin

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James Fraser

Date: 8/23/2010 2:31:00 PM

Even sad tears bring a spring of life as the tickles liven saddened cheeks >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2010 9:49:00 PM

Yes ..very sad but joy comes in the morning Michael... keep the faith.. it gets better as time goes on.. these poems had to be written so the experience of death has caused this to be so.. who knows why?..with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2010 6:42:00 PM

Nicely done. Have a great week now! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/30/2010 4:30:00 PM

Very emotional write with nice imagery, Michael

Sarah Hales

Date: 7/30/2010 11:40:00 AM

Dearest Michael I feel what you are feeling in this write ..grief is an unexplained emotion and I send love and warmth to you and your family sarah x

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/30/2010 11:31:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/30/2010 11:06:00 AM

Hope you are better...take care!

Skat A

Date: 7/30/2010 10:12:00 AM

VERY SAD EMOTIONS, MICHAEL.-SKAT

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 7/30/2010 7:14:00 AM

Touching and with feeling. .Celene..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2010 6:27:00 AM

Good morning Michael, how are you hope you are doing well. A very sad Haiku, i can feel the sadness while reading your haiku. Have a blessed day around your loved ones,..p.d.