"a Teardrop"

Tears trickle down slow
over my cheeks lightly and sad
as drops fall from chin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Even sad tears bring a spring of life as the tickles liven saddened cheeks >> James
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August 1, 2010 at 9:49 PM
Yes ..very sad but joy comes in the morning Michael... keep the faith.. it gets better as time goes on.. these poems had to be written so the experience of death has caused this to be so.. who knows why?..with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:42 PM
Nicely done. Have a great week now! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 4:30 PM
Very emotional write with nice imagery, Michael
Hales Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Dearest Michael I feel what you are feeling in this write ..grief is an unexplained emotion and I send love and warmth to you and your family sarah x
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July 30, 2010 at 11:31 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Michael. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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July 30, 2010 at 11:06 AM
Hope you are better...take care!
A  Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 10:12 AM
VERY SAD EMOTIONS, MICHAEL.-SKAT
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July 30, 2010 at 7:14 AM
Touching and with feeling. .Celene..
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July 30, 2010 at 6:27 AM
Good morning Michael, how are you hope you are doing well. A very sad Haiku, i can feel the sadness while reading your haiku. Have a blessed day around your loved ones,..p.d.
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