Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

A Tear That Is His

That same raindrop catches me either in the sun or shade...
                            The clouds look all the same but for a few that won't fade...
                                        The taste of a tear is always on my tongue...
                                                A salty spice from a cry not sung...
                                             I look up to Heaven to see who it is...
                                               My unborn child , a tear that is his...



                                                      written by Michael J Falotico
                                                                         for
                                                         Falling Raindrop contest
                                                        sponsored by Carol Brown

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Juniper Lock October 14, 2012 at 5:58 PM Breathtakingly beautiful..JuniperL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 2, 2012 at 7:01 PM CONGRATS MICHAEL LUV ON A WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE WIN.. JG ALWAYS ENJOYS YOUR MAGNIFICENT EXPRESSIONS .. MISSING U .. XOXO

Debra Falgout September 1, 2012 at 8:43 PM Congrats on you win Michael, have a wonderfull day, love debra

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 11:13 AM Michael, congrats with your entry in Carol's rain contest.. have yourself a nice one... always~PD

Joyce Johnson August 30, 2012 at 7:19 PM Nicely done Michael and congratulations. Love, Joyce

Debbie Guzzi August 30, 2012 at 4:45 PM I too think the souls of unborn children are UP there [nod] in Judaeism it's called the Guff [I think] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders August 30, 2012 at 3:57 PM I am touched by this heartfelt outpouring of words. You are not alone. I, too, taste a tear. Congrats on your win, Michael. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage August 30, 2012 at 2:16 PM Michael, such a beautiful poem, and so sad. Well done. congratulations on your win. Lee

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 30, 2012 at 12:42 PM Congratulations Michael this is a heart tugger and a super win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2012 at 11:55 AM Congratulations on your win in my "Raindrops Falling" contest Michael. I had a very hard time judging this contest as most of the poems were so well written. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi August 20, 2012 at 8:06 AM A very sad and heartfelt write, Michael. I didnt know u kept the pain behind your happy and romantic words. You're one of the God's toughests.

Cory Long August 17, 2012 at 10:13 AM Soup Mail buddy... cory

Don Johnson August 16, 2012 at 3:37 PM very touching of the heart mate...well done ..

Kash Poet August 16, 2012 at 2:04 PM Such a heartfelt poem by you Michael..Enjoyed the read.Thanks for my placement in your contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 16, 2012 at 1:35 PM oh so sensitive and tender.. I know how it feels Michael luv.. still dealing with my own demons luv.. best wishes .. thankxx for choosng my entry as a winner.. blowing a big smoochie to u.. luv..JG in healing mode..xoxo

Russell Sivey August 16, 2012 at 11:07 AM Oh, how sad this poem is Michael! My heart goes out to you my friend! What a powerful and ingraining write! What a lovely piece! Great Work!!

Cory Long August 16, 2012 at 10:28 AM this was a beautiful write.. I have enjoyed it greatly.. Thank you for being there :) cory

Poet Destroyer A August 16, 2012 at 9:30 AM Dear Michael...a very sad touching poem....stopping by to wish you luck... tag you as soon as I get home...xox...pd