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a tear tattooed at the corner of his eye

hardship chiseled in his features
silence laden by a troubled past
his thoughts kept to himself
behind an invisible wall of insulation
while his face speaks to me in whispers
of a history muddled with shady details

eyes reveal that regrets he's had a few
and dreams now seem out of reach
yet there's a part of him that refuses to give up


AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 12:05 PM
Great written portrait of a troubled man
Gauthier Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ much appreciated
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