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a tear tattooed at the corner of his eye

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hardship chiseled in his features silence laden by a troubled past his thoughts kept to himself behind an invisible wall of insulation while his face speaks to me in whispers of a history muddled with shady details eyes reveal that regrets he's had a few and dreams now seem out of reach yet there's a part of him that refuses to give up AP: 3rd place 2025

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Date: 6/30/2025 12:05:00 PM
Great written portrait of a troubled man
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Date: 6/30/2025 3:42:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ much appreciated

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