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A Tear a Day

People ask me how I'm fairing
I say I'm fine by just declairing

One single tear a day
I cry my love silently away

One single tear that's all
For a memory I may recall

One single tear bereft
Of happiness and hope that left

One single tear for her
The one who made my heart to soar






( for Paula Swanson's Tear contest )

Copyright © John Loving Iii | Year Posted 2010

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Sarah Comstock Date: 1/10/2011 3:18:00 PM this is my favorite one so far today Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 12/27/2010 12:41:00 PM tender. T.S. Login to Reply

Taina Rodriguez Date: 12/23/2010 10:16:00 AM I really like this! Thanks so much for your comment on my poem! Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 12/20/2010 5:47:00 PM cry a love away. so tragic. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Johneesha Weaver Date: 12/19/2010 9:20:00 PM I like that alot thats nice and thank you for your comment i want to read more of your stuff when i get the chance and thanks again. Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 12/18/2010 10:09:00 AM hi John. Thanks for visiting. Sad, sad words here my friend, hope it's not personal. best of luck in the contest. Eamon Login to Reply

Rick Rucker Date: 12/18/2010 5:08:00 AM So touching! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/16/2010 12:27:00 PM I pray one day your tears dry and the happiness returns, dear John. A very moving entry for Paula's contest. God bless you, Carolyn Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/14/2010 7:48:00 PM enjoyed this, so sad yet an inspiration for the reader. Harry Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 12/14/2010 3:20:00 PM I can feel this is more than just a poem for the contest.....you write from the heart. I'm so sorry for your tears, and hope in time, things will get easier. :) Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 12/14/2010 6:36:00 AM I have enjoyed the poems for this contest..Yours is great..I love the concept of one tear..BG Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/14/2010 6:24:00 AM Very witty write on the tear dropping one single tear everyday for who made my heart to soar, john Login to Reply