A Tear

Yes, I shed a tear
     No one saw the tear but me
     You just walked away
     With my heart in your pocket
     And me with your pungent scent
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 10:10 AM
How often this happens! We feel as if the whole world should feel the impact of our life and only we end up heartbroken! It took me many years to understand the commonality of men...that we all suffer and no one understands our individual suffering....until Jesus (for me)
Blanca Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:26 PM
So true my friend. Thanks for your help and kind words.
Rigoler Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Quite good, says more that what's printed, too! Many thanks for stopping by to read my verse. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
Blanca Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:10 PM
Yes Maurice oh wise one you have experience in these matters.
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