A Tear

Yes, I shed a tear No one saw the tear but me You just walked away With my heart in your pocket And me with your pungent scent

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2018 10:10:00 AM

How often this happens! We feel as if the whole world should feel the impact of our life and only we end up heartbroken! It took me many years to understand the commonality of men...that we all suffer and no one understands our individual suffering....until Jesus (for me)

Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/27/2018 1:26:00 PM

So true my friend. Thanks for your help and kind words.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 2/22/2018 10:13:00 AM

Quite good, says more that what's printed, too! Many thanks for stopping by to read my verse. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/26/2018 3:10:00 PM

Yes Maurice oh wise one you have experience in these matters.