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A Taste of Spring

Distracted
Restlessly inactive
Desperate for the formula for joy

Attracted
Recklessly reactive
Rescued from the silence of the void

(Hearing everything)
Over the frozen ground
You walk on by
                   I explode
Without so much as a sound

But then you're near!
Trembling like the earth
Inside

The ice that disappears
Blown softly open
By degrees

As slight as deep
Morning tundra yawns 
Its filthy whine

Disturbing the soil of years


A product of my environment
Skeptical and wired
More than a little irrelevant
Always so tired

Of tragedies already written
Of competition for roles
To survive, win or lose,
To pay the price for repetition
I vow to leave this spectacle behind

But then you're here!
Trembling like the trees
Outside

Your buzzing, breathless fear
Blown softly over
By a breeze

As light as sleep
Budding blossoms weep
Their minted sighs

Releasing the doubt alive in me


(Please)
Baby come for me
Let me know your zeal
Let me know your greed
Let me know you're real

Even if you may not love me
Baby come for me

(Born of the urge
To devour what is beautiful
Favor the nectar of a queen

Torn by the surge
To divide the irreducible
Savor the subtle taste of spring)

Hearing everything
Over the fertile ground
You walk on by
                   I explo-



© Michal Czechak 2010-2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/25/2016 8:20:00 PM
Michal, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Michal Czechak
Date: 4/25/2016 8:21:00 PM
Hello and thank you for the welcome. I'm certain I'll visit your own contributions to foster a fruitful discourse. Cheers, -M.C.
Date: 4/24/2016 12:43:00 AM
Well, when reading the poem the first time, I did have some thoughts. You have too much space between some of your versed lines. Yes, it flows like a lyric, but at the same time reads like a free verse poem. My favorite line was " the ice disappearing --- open by degree" great metaphor. Enjoyed. Linda
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Michal Czechak
Date: 4/26/2016 5:49:00 AM
I'm not too well-versed (smirk) in exact definitions for poetic structures. I have since changed the form to "Verse." These are song lyrics and that option wasn't available in the drop-down. -M.C.
Date: 4/24/2016 12:31:00 AM
Michal, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Michal Czechak
Date: 4/24/2016 12:34:00 AM
Thanks for the welcome. Any chance you have constructive criticism for this one. -MC
Date: 4/23/2016 7:07:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Michael.
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