A Taste of Paradise

A Taste of Paradise

Passionate, moonlit nights ensconced in my beloved’s embrace,  
A feeling of exquisite pleasure … we’re totally consumed by desire’s fire. 
Restored is our faith in the enduring power of true love, 
And the gift of infinite joy it bequests to the heart and soul. 
Drunk on emotions, delightfully we soar, wrapped up    
Intensely in these magical moments, glowing in rapture so divine, we
Sing a harmonious duet to enthralling heavenly music; so
Enchanting and eternal like stars is our love … we taste Paradise.


12-22-2015

Contest:     Paradise - Acrostic
Sponsor:     John Hamilton
Placement:  3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Its been a long while dear friend. I hope you are doing well. Happy new year once again. Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7
Sietesantos Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thank you dear Funom, for your kind words, high score, encouragement and continued support for my work! Have a great day! Pandita
Legend Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 8:11 AM
great poem pandita
Sietesantos Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Thank you kindly, LL, for your lovely compliments which I appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita
Maverick Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Well Pandita, seems like there is no extra spice to be added to this mixture, pleased to have stopped by this 2015, just..'
Sietesantos Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 6:58 PM
Dear Joe, thank you for your kind support during 2015! I look forward to greater interactions in this new year, and wish you love, blessings, and joy! Pandita
A  Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 10:17 PM
Pandita, a very nice win. SKAT
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December 29, 2015 at 8:10 PM
Thank you, thank you, dear Skat! Hearing from you always mean a lot to me! Pandita
A   Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 4:19 AM
Pandita, Congratulations on your win. LINDA
Sietesantos Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:08 PM
Hi Linda, I appreciate your kind congratulations as always! Best wishes. Pandita
Cheema Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 3:13 AM
Wow! That's a romantic paradise, Pandita! Congrats on your placement!
Sietesantos Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:07 PM
Thank you kindly, Baleen, for your lovely compliments which I appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita
A. Sharma Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 2:00 AM
Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Pandita.. congrats on big win!
Sietesantos Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Hi Dr. Sharma, I really appreciate your kind congratulations! Thank you! Pandita
Lindley Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 6:10 PM
I love the depth and beauty within your paradise! Congrats on your great win my friend!! A7
Sietesantos Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 7:00 PM
Robert, thank you for all your good wishes and kind support during 2015! I wish you only the very best for the new year - love, joy, good health and success in all your endeavors! Warmest regards. Pandita
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Luscious!!! BIG congrats, Pandita. I REALLY LIKE your sweet poem!!
Sietesantos Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 5:00 PM
My dear Andie, your kind, superlative compliments are so inspirational as always! Thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read my work throughout the year! Warmest regards. Pandita
Tor Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Wow Pandita I want to experience that. Congratulations on your win!
Sietesantos Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 5:05 PM
Thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read my work, especially this particular piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Such wonderful romantic emotions you express about your paradise of love, Pandita. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Sietesantos Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 7:01 PM
Sandra, many thanks for your high praises! Hope you are enjoying a delightful holiday season! Pandita
Callus Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 3:08 AM
An enchanting and delightful approach to this paradise theme that true love can inspire! May these lovely emotions last you a lifetime, Pandita! ~ Congratulations on this deserved win! ~ Wishing you all the best. // paul
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December 27, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Thank you, dear Paul, for all your good wishes and kind support during 2015! I wish you only the very best for the new year - love, joy, good health, and success in all your endeavors! Warmest regards. Pandita
Hamilton Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Congrats Pandita, this was an excellent acrostic, 36/40 hard to beat. Thanks so much for your posting of this gem.
Sietesantos Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 1:03 AM
Hi John, I am so thrilled and honored that you liked my acrostic! Thank you so much for the placement! Warmest regards. Pandita
Vaso Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 12:42 AM
Feliz Navidad! I got stuck on the 5th line and had a lot of fun there! Cheers!
Sietesantos Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 12:55 AM
Hola Arturo! I hope you had a very merry Christmas! Thank you so much for being so supportive all throughout the year! Wishing you a very happy and exciting 2016! Pandita
A   Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Pandita,, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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December 27, 2015 at 12:58 AM
My dear Linda, you are a gem! Thank you for all your good wishes and kind support during 2015! I wish you only the very best for the new year - love, joy, good health and success in all your endeavors! Warmest regards. Pandita
Ayala Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Hi Pandita, this is really a beautiful take on the Paradise theme. What an enchanting Acrostic! A-7 and good luck with the contest. Best wishes. Kika
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December 23, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Dear Kika, thank you for your sweet compliments and high score which are always appreciated! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you! Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 23, 2015 at 12:11 AM
Pandita, Being in love indeed elevates one's body and soul to feel as if they are having a taste of paradise. This is one of the best acrostics I have read lately...and there have been a lot of really stunnng ones posted. I wish you a Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Love and Aloha, Connie
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December 23, 2015 at 11:15 AM
My dear Connie, your kind, superlative compliments are so inspirational as always! Thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read my work, especially this particular piece! Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous New Year! Pandita
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