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A Taste of Paradise

A Taste of Paradise Passionate, moonlit nights ensconced in my beloved’s embrace, A feeling of exquisite pleasure … we’re totally consumed by desire’s fire. Restored is our faith in the enduring power of true love, And the gift of infinite joy it bequests to the heart and soul. Drunk on emotions, delightfully we soar, wrapped up Intensely in these magical moments, glowing in rapture so divine, we Sing a harmonious duet to enthralling heavenly music; so Enchanting and eternal like stars is our love … we taste Paradise. 12-22-2015 Contest: Paradise - Acrostic Sponsor: John Hamilton Placement: 3rd

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/19/2016 8:28:00 AM

Its been a long while dear friend. I hope you are doing well. Happy new year once again. Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/20/2016 12:37:00 PM

Thank you dear Funom, for your kind words, high score, encouragement and continued support for my work! Have a great day! Pandita

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/10/2016 8:11:00 AM

great poem pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/10/2016 11:30:00 AM

Thank you kindly, LL, for your lovely compliments which I appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/31/2015 11:44:00 AM

Well Pandita, seems like there is no extra spice to be added to this mixture, pleased to have stopped by this 2015, just..'

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/2/2016 6:58:00 PM

Dear Joe, thank you for your kind support during 2015! I look forward to greater interactions in this new year, and wish you love, blessings, and joy! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 12/28/2015 10:17:00 PM

Pandita, a very nice win. SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/29/2015 8:10:00 PM

Thank you, thank you, dear Skat! Hearing from you always mean a lot to me! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2015 4:19:00 AM

Pandita, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/29/2015 8:08:00 PM

Hi Linda, I appreciate your kind congratulations as always! Best wishes. Pandita

Balveen Cheema

Date: 12/28/2015 3:13:00 AM

Wow! That's a romantic paradise, Pandita! Congrats on your placement!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/29/2015 8:07:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Baleen, for your lovely compliments which I appreciate! All the best to you. Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/28/2015 2:00:00 AM

Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic Pandita.. congrats on big win!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/29/2015 8:06:00 PM

Hi Dr. Sharma, I really appreciate your kind congratulations! Thank you! Pandita

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/27/2015 6:10:00 PM

I love the depth and beauty within your paradise! Congrats on your great win my friend!! A7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 7:00:00 PM

Robert, thank you for all your good wishes and kind support during 2015! I wish you only the very best for the new year - love, joy, good health and success in all your endeavors! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2015 3:11:00 PM

Luscious!!! BIG congrats, Pandita. I REALLY LIKE your sweet poem!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 5:00:00 PM

My dear Andie, your kind, superlative compliments are so inspirational as always! Thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read my work throughout the year! Warmest regards. Pandita

Michael Tor

Date: 12/27/2015 10:50:00 AM

Wow Pandita I want to experience that. Congratulations on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 5:05:00 PM

Thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read my work, especially this particular piece! Warmest regards. Pandita

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2015 9:10:00 AM

Such wonderful romantic emotions you express about your paradise of love, Pandita. Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 7:01:00 PM

Sandra, many thanks for your high praises! Hope you are enjoying a delightful holiday season! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2015 3:08:00 AM

An enchanting and delightful approach to this paradise theme that true love can inspire! May these lovely emotions last you a lifetime, Pandita! ~ Congratulations on this deserved win! ~ Wishing you all the best. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 7:03:00 PM

Thank you, dear Paul, for all your good wishes and kind support during 2015! I wish you only the very best for the new year - love, joy, good health, and success in all your endeavors! Warmest regards. Pandita

John Hamilton

Date: 12/26/2015 11:57:00 PM

Congrats Pandita, this was an excellent acrostic, 36/40 hard to beat. Thanks so much for your posting of this gem.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 1:03:00 AM

Hi John, I am so thrilled and honored that you liked my acrostic! Thank you so much for the placement! Warmest regards. Pandita

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/26/2015 12:42:00 AM

Feliz Navidad! I got stuck on the 5th line and had a lot of fun there! Cheers!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 12:55:00 AM

Hola Arturo! I hope you had a very merry Christmas! Thank you so much for being so supportive all throughout the year! Wishing you a very happy and exciting 2016! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 9:35:00 PM

Pandita,, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/27/2015 12:58:00 AM

My dear Linda, you are a gem! Thank you for all your good wishes and kind support during 2015! I wish you only the very best for the new year - love, joy, good health and success in all your endeavors! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 12/23/2015 9:59:00 AM

Hi Pandita, this is really a beautiful take on the Paradise theme. What an enchanting Acrostic! A-7 and good luck with the contest. Best wishes. Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/23/2015 11:20:00 AM

Dear Kika, thank you for your sweet compliments and high score which are always appreciated! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you! Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/23/2015 12:11:00 AM

Pandita, Being in love indeed elevates one's body and soul to feel as if they are having a taste of paradise. This is one of the best acrostics I have read lately...and there have been a lot of really stunnng ones posted. I wish you a Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Love and Aloha, Connie

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/23/2015 11:15:00 AM

My dear Connie, your kind, superlative compliments are so inspirational as always! Thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read my work, especially this particular piece! Wishing you and yours a very Merry Christmas and a happy and prosperous New Year! Pandita