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A taste of doomsday

And suddenly the world stopped spinning,
its colours faded away one by one deplorable.
People disappeared and all became eerily quiet.
A loneliness I'd never felt grew most unbearable.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 5:29 PM
love the flow....seems like we've had our fair share of doomsdays lately. :-)
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 5:56 AM
Yes ~ enough. We need feel good stories. Lots of them please.
Smith  Avatar
June 19, 2026 at 7:46 PM
This feeling of doomsday proportions has been with me while poetry soup found its new home and fixed all the glitches. Hopefully that feeling will lift now.
Gauthier Avatar
June 20, 2026 at 5:07 PM
Thankfully everything is back... bigger and better
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