A Tango On the Lake

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A Tango on the Lake When Hooded Grebe are wooing a mate Magic’s made in tangoes on the lake Lovebirds perform synchronised in tune Bewitched beneath a bedazzling moon. It’s a wonderful courtship display Where intricate movements come to play They rise above swaying cheek to cheek Afore spinning round in ecstasy. Stretching their necks as they pirouette Head wagging when dancing breast to breast In harmonious amorous moves That show they’re eager and in the groove. A theatrical exhibition Igniting the flame of their mission Tango danced in ardent fettle Worthy of winning a gold medal. It’s inspiring what Hooded Grebe do In a dance of devotion for two Lovebirds mysterious alchemy Procuring tango naturally. 30th October 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2021 6:43:00 PM

Perhaps Marlon Brando and Maria Shneider studied the hooded grebe before filming 'The Last Tango' back in '72... although I don't recall any 'stretching of the necks.' A very entertaining AND educational write for me, Belle. Thank you! :) gw

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 8:09:00 PM

Thank you Gershon very much, so pleased the poem let me entertain,you… Belle

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/30/2021 11:40:00 AM

As bewildering as the hummingbird display or bucks going at it! All that energy wasted before they even get to the task! But enjoyed your poem!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2021 8:06:00 PM

Thank you Rico, I don’t think the energy is wasted at all, but then - women are from Venus, men are from Mars, it’s written in the stars… Belle

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/30/2021 5:48:00 AM

While reading your great lines, I was struck with the image of men having to perform such a dance to attract a mate. LOL Silly, I know, but your details were so well written that I saw it happening.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/30/2021 4:26:00 PM

Oh Jenna you have made me laugh, most of the men I know won’t dance after courtship never mind before. Thank you very much… Belle