A Tall Tragic Tale

On the day before Christmas, 1997 I was in a supermarket Saw many people, I thought it’ll take long time to buy gifts Christmas getting more and more annoying every year, Cursed and wondered if kids really play with costly toys. Noticed a small boy pressing doll against chest, touching hair Looking sad, asking granny if she has enough to buy the doll She asked to wait, looked around, left the boy with the doll I walked to him, and asked who he wanted to give the doll to. He said “The doll my sister wanted the most this Christmas” I replied, “Don’t worry, Santa would bring it to her after all. The boy said,” I don’t think Santa can give where she is now My mom will carry it as she's about to go to see God soon” I told Dad, tell mom not to go, wait my return from the market I reached my pocket, had enough for the doll and some spare The granny came, I left market finishing shopping differently. On my way home, I couldn’t get the little boy out of my mind. Then, remembered having read the news of a drunk truck driver Hitting a car in which there was a young lady and a little girl The little girl died right away and the young lady was in coma. Next day, read the news that the young lady has passed away. Bought roses, went to the mortuary where dead body exposed Saw her in coffin, the photo of the boy and the doll on her chest.
************ **Unfortunately it is a true story except my going to the mortuary though I wanted it much but could not as I was a foreigner in Those days visiting my son in Atlanta, GA. My only past-time was to Visit Malls and reading newspapers. December 23, 2014 Form: Free Verse First Place win

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Date: 1/11/2015 10:04:00 PM
Dr Ram,, Congratulations on your Christmas Daze win, Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2015 1:13:00 PM
congratulations on this sad but fine write , well done
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Date: 1/10/2015 2:32:00 AM
So sad,so perfect;congrats on the win Dr. Ram...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 7:56:00 PM
Oh Ram I can so see you doing this GOOD for you! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/9/2015 7:56:00 PM
A sad moment in life, gracefully told. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:50:00 PM
Hi Dr. Ram, congratulations on your win for this so sad but wonderfully expressed poem. Sandra
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:21:00 PM
A very, very sad tale and you told it so well... Congrats on the win, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:05:00 PM
heartbreaking story Dr Mehta - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/24/2014 7:27:00 PM
Dr Ram, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/24/2014 2:38:00 PM
gut-wrenching , beautiful story, dr.ram... have a merry Christmas. huggs
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Date: 12/24/2014 11:17:00 AM
Heartbreaking story but one I will always remember reading. Small, caring gestures can mean so much, not just during the holidays but all year. Thanks for sharing...Merry Christmas, Dr. Ram...Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/24/2014 9:20:00 AM
So heartbreaking, Dr.Mehta. Chirldren or so compasionate. Beautiful write, Dr. 7 Blessings to you and your dear family
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Date: 12/24/2014 8:58:00 AM
A truly tragic tale that teaches us how transient our life is and how wonderful it is to care and think of others! Excellent story Dr. Ram!
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Date: 12/23/2014 11:46:00 AM
What a heartbreaking story Dr. Mehta. Last winter friends of mine, their son and his wife and three grandchildren were in a car accident and the mother died instantly. Their two sons were in critical condition but both miraculously pulled through. The youngest is still learning to walk and talk again. We should always remember our blessings.
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Date: 12/23/2014 10:14:00 AM
oh my, what a heartbreaking story. you did this very well, dr. ram. I wish you a merry christmas this year and a great win for this poem if it is in a contest.
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Date: 12/23/2014 9:35:00 AM
A very sad story Dr Ram....But glad you were able to help....
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