A Tall Story

Reaching
for the stars
giganteum
ambassadors of a 
lost age

Sequoia-The great ones..Inspired by Steinbeck's observation on growing up in CA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gauthier Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Beautiful, Brian ~ a tall tribute
Strand Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 12:52 AM
Amazing trees Line by all accounts
Kroll Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 12:26 AM
You've captured their stature so beautifully in a few words, Brian. Kathy
Strand Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 3:10 AM
Thanks Kathy
Bhurani Avatar
May 31, 2016 at 1:12 PM
Wow poem.....Congrats
Goff Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 8:26 PM
never seen one, would like to, nice work! Brian...jim
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September 9, 2009 at 6:08 AM
Oh, they are beautiful! Your poem is a perfect sentiment for the feeling one has when standing at the bottom of a giant sequoia and looking up. BIG SMILE on this one, Brian. Always, Dane Ann
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September 8, 2009 at 5:18 PM
Steinbeck was always one of my favorite writers, Brian, and this is a great tribute to the common man characters struggling to reach new heights. Excellent cingku! Love, Carolyn
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September 8, 2009 at 4:24 PM
You've done it now Brian,..I'm going to have to put this in mine fav's,...my favorite tree ever !! And you put this poem together very well !! awesome ! james
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September 8, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Oh! Love the feel of this! The last 2 lines are awesome! Thank you for choosing my poem as a finalist in your contest. It is always an honor to have your work chosen by a peer is such high standing! ~Trudy~
Rider Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 3:06 PM
Oh! Love the feel of this! The last 2 lines are awesome! Thank you for choosing my poem as a finalist in your contest. It is always an honor to have your work chosen by a peer is such high standing! ~Trudy~
Culverhouse Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 1:19 PM
nicely written, I did send in one for the new contest, can't wait to get the new assignment! It is very challenging,
Sheart Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Very thought provoking brian. Makes one want to sit and ponder a bit. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 8, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Hi, Brian! I am reading your Cinku and I am being transported to the universe's realm... powerful stars that inspire awe! These are God's creations bringing light into the Universe. Beautifully written with deepness of thought. Keep on writing. Wishing you the best. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Warmest regards, Andrew.
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September 8, 2009 at 10:58 AM
ps...My "song of gratitude", Brian, for choosing my poem among the winning entries for your wonderful Hymn of Praise contest! Thank you...I'm indeed pleased and grateful! ~ Love, Carrie
Richards Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 10:55 AM
Yes, they do reach for the stars....so magnificent are they!! Growing up in California, one of my earliest memories is my parents taking a photograph of my brother and I beneath a giant sequoia in Sequoia National Park...and of course there are old photographs of automobiles driving through the hallowed out base of these giants. Unbelieveable if you don't see them for yourselves! They are wonders of the world. ~ Love, Carrie
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