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A Talk With Him

Outside, a table awaits idle: I join as though it was my companion Pondering about life as if it were water appeasable to the deepest canyon Trees and scattered leaves waving alongside the lake facing the north; sighing Opportunity after opportunity, oh how Ungrateful I am as I whisper to him crying " A work in progress I am Lord, assist as I sprinkle the ground below with my tears Lead me and guide me for I shall follow you through out my years Let your word be used as a sword to fight against my enemy peers Unseal your lips Father for your words of wisdom are therapeutic to my ears" A canvas set aside of unfading colors; a mirror painting of the Lord above My knees gently caress the pavement thanking him for his everlasting love Caterpillars gather around to celebrate and form to butterflies within my chest Thanking the Lord once again, for I know with Faith he will conquer the rest

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Donetta Harless

Date: 8/9/2018 2:58:00 PM

I can so relate to your words. I too am a work in progress. Always learning and striving to become a better person. What can God do with perfection? It is through our imperfections that His glory is revealed. Beautifully written..

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/11/2013 6:34:00 AM

Talking to Him, sometimes brings me the peace and reassurance no one else can. Love this one Pace.. btw you got soupmail. :) beautiful piece this is, especially love the butterflies :) hugs me

Brittany Reynolds

Date: 10/26/2012 6:59:00 PM

Very peaceful.

Delilah Ventura

Date: 10/11/2012 8:13:00 PM

Very touching...Truly touched my inner soul....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/10/2012 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your outstanding featured poem this week Pace. Love, Carol

Doreen Wright

Date: 7/29/2012 10:46:00 PM

Thanking Him for His everlasting love...have mercy...deep words and great writing! FAV'D!!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 7/30/2012 7:12:00 AM

Yes maam...thank you Doreen!!! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2012 8:05:00 AM

It must be nice to feel the comfort of he who lights the canvas... enjoyed..pd

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 7/30/2012 7:12:00 AM

Yes indeed..thank you PD!!

Diane Christian

Date: 6/5/2012 6:28:00 AM

beautiful keepw riitng dear God bless you love diane

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/5/2012 7:11:00 AM

Thank you my dear sweet Diane!!

Dan Kearley

Date: 4/25/2012 9:27:00 PM

X-celent write here G Pace! I'm so glad I started with this one! Keep it flowing~~~

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/26/2012 2:32:00 AM

Lol..thank you sir!!

Paul Williams

Date: 4/23/2012 5:45:00 AM

Thanks for looking at my posts. Just started to share. Thanks for kind words. However I took a look at yours. A Talk With Him.... NICE......pjwilliams

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/26/2012 2:31:00 AM

No problem!! Thank you for sharing!!

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 4/15/2012 5:17:00 PM

Oh yes, continue to have faith in him all things are possible. I love the last verse. The analogy Caterpillars and Butterflies it's like you had little faith but then came a spiritual break through.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/18/2012 5:00:00 AM

Oh yes maam!! Thank you!!

Bertha Davis

Date: 3/24/2012 1:35:00 PM

Encouraging words, Thanks. I reeally enjoy reading your thoughts of inspiration.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/18/2012 4:59:00 AM

You're welcome!! Thanks!!

John Beam

Date: 3/20/2012 12:52:00 PM

Enjoyed reading thanks for sharing, I thank the Lord Jesus no weapon formed against you shall prosper. I am glad He protects us from and destroys there carnal weapons.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 4/18/2012 4:58:00 AM

No thank you!!