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A Tale of Two Kitties

She is a kitty that wanders the street. The other cat, looking exactly like her, now happy, has tuna and chicken to eat. Only one kitty has reason to purr. The other cat - looking exactly like her - she has to forage and sleep in the rain. Only one kitty has reason to purr. Unlike the house cat, the street cat feels pain. She has to forage and sleep in the rain. To be with a family is her desire. Unlike the house cat, the street cat feels pain. She longs to be cuddled, curled up by a fire. To be with a family is her desire. The street cat looks into a window one day. She longs to be cuddled, curled up by a fire. From inside, the house cat looks out at the stray. The street cat looks into a window one day. The window is open, so what might ensue? From inside, the house cat looks out at the stray. Two cats so identical. Nobody knew! The window is open. So what might ensue? The street cat jumps up as the house cat jumps down! Two cats so identical. Nobody knew! The house cat feels free, and she runs toward the town. The street cat jumps up as the house cat jumps down. A child appears, and the street cat he sees. The house cat feels free, and she runs toward the town. The street cat, once nervous, will soon feel at ease. A child appears, and the street cat he sees. He says to that kitty, “You’re so dirty. Why?” The street cat, once nervous, will soon feel at ease. The boy picks her up; she feels suddenly shy. He says to that kitty, “You’re so dirty. Why?” The street cat is purring. She’d never done that!! The boy picks her up; she feels suddenly shy. The boy says, “Time for a bath, Queenie Cat!” The street cat is purring. She’d never done that - That cat once forlorn that had been on her own! The boy says, “Time for a bath, Queenie Cat.” The REAL Queenie cat is now lost lost and alone! That cat once forlorn that had been on her own, now happy, has tuna and chicken to eat. The REAL Queenie Cat is now lost and alone. She is a kitty that wanders the street! Written Oct. 3, 2016 for Eve Roper's Pantoum Poem Contest

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Date: 3/27/2018 4:39:00 PM
Wow what a beautifully convoluted switcheroo. Awesome pantoum, Andrea.
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Date: 10/17/2016 8:09:00 PM
Andrea, love the poem congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/17/2016 11:20:00 AM
The title alone was worth a placement...I looked for the opening to be....it was the best of kitties - it was the worst of kitties...
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:03:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/17/2016 12:39:00 AM
This is a beautiful pantoum, and so fluently, absolutely great! Congratulations :)
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Date: 10/8/2016 8:23:00 PM
OMG Andrea, one of my favourite subjects cats, This Pantoum sounds so much like my cat Smokey, he wanders the streets but always comes back home on the dot of 4pm, I love this poem, good luck in the contest, you deserve the win. Take care......Vera
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Date: 10/8/2016 2:54:00 PM
Wow! This is an excellent pantoum my dear friend, Andrea!Very long one. How did you do it? I mean the pattern? I wrote a dedication poem using this form but it was already my second attempt following one of your past pantoum poems. I hope I did it right coz long time ago, you'd already given me an advice. I found it too difficult so it took time for me for a second attempt. This pantooum is sure winning piece! GL! love lots and hug, Leonora
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Date: 10/7/2016 2:47:00 PM
Such excellent poetry is no coincidence...
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Date: 10/7/2016 2:33:00 PM
Love this type of poem, interweaving the lines. Wonderful tell of the two cats.
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Date: 10/6/2016 12:25:00 AM
What I thought would be a cute poem, turned out to be one with a much deeper meaning! Loved this!
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Date: 10/4/2016 4:36:00 PM
Love this Andrea a very creative tale with a powerful statement on our world. A Fav. I love daver austin's new poem on Autumn. I hope more people will both read it and fav it. Thank you so much for introducing me to his work. I love his poetry with all my heart. His Summer's End number twelve on the top 100 deserves more favs as well. Love you and thank you again for telling me about daver austin.
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Date: 10/4/2016 3:57:00 PM
A wonderful story Andrea, I enjoyed the tale ...hugs
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Date: 10/4/2016 3:25:00 PM
I had a cat fro many years named Bilbo. She had a lot of kittens which we gave away. You used the Malaysian form to good effect in this work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/4/2016 2:45:00 PM
what a well-developed piece, andie... this reminds me of ' the prince and the pauper'... eve will surely enjoy this kitty story the way i did!.. huggs
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Date: 10/4/2016 12:57:00 PM
I like this, Andrea! I feel sorry for the real "Queenie" but happy for the stray. You did a fantastic job on this phantom! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 10/4/2016 11:50:00 AM
A great pantoum Andrea. Each gets to feel how the other does. In the end we all want to feel loved by someone and not be alone.
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Date: 10/4/2016 11:25:00 AM
A tale of kitty woe, but tell the poor baby to come to Austin's front porch where there is always good food to eat and fresh water too. Love, daver
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Date: 10/4/2016 10:26:00 AM
Almost like the man in the mask. Very cute story, Andrea. One of these days I'm gonna come calling so you can teach me to write a pantoum.
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Date: 10/4/2016 9:22:00 AM
What a story told in pantoum !! Well written:) Eve will love this one:)
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:23:00 AM
Oh my Andrea! How adorable! Good luck Eve will love this!:)-luloo
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:40:00 AM
A cute write Andrea, we seem to never be happy with what we have.
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