A Tale of Love Not Well Told

Mosses dabbed gray

                                       Silver moon above shines blind

                                             Owl hoots distant rats
        
                                         Drag  glum silence of blood

                                          A tale of love not well told
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 3:12 AM
More please more tge third oine is wow!.. olive eloisa
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:14 PM
Thanks Olive. Have you read" Olive is green-a tribute"? Read this and comment. Love>rajat
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 5:08 AM
Hello Rajat! Very sadness written pen Rajat! Tanka as always so well penned in your own style.A 7 from me! Hope all well with you my dearest friend. I. Wish you a very lovely Sunday! Gid bless you! :) Love and hugs! xxxxxxx D. ^O^
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:16 PM
Thanks Sweet D.Your lovely comments always inspires me.Your friend Rajat
A  Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 11:59 PM
Love the tanka. SKAT
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Lovely inspiring comments SKAT>love>rajat
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Oh but I need more to know what's happening? more please. Light & Love
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Debbie I would write a poem for you where the story of love will be well told. In fact I am a crazy poet.My love has also a crazy shape. I write poems when and only when bugs dictate me to do so.My poems are also bug shaped..small..microscopic.Debbie my lovely friend I believe because of friends like you I have endeavored to write something whatever merits they have.Love Debbie.
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 2:43 PM
Interesting work..I wonder if rats tremble in their boots when they hear the Owl hoot?..Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2015 at 11:55 AM
- Better said, than not :)) - I wish you a lovely weekend,Rajat :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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