A Sword of the Heavens Did Glean

A sword of the heavens did glean From railings and arbors of dead thorn and bramble, where ghostly reminders remain Fall droplets of blood ‘pon a crimson embroider left carelessly out in the rain Our story begins in a deep mountain valley, a village so peaceful and free When one day the darkness did unsheathe its horror with metal and death you will see The army of Satan, a wicked battalion, Hell’s fire their sabers were forged Dark Skeletal visions in leather and armor the depths of the earth had been gorged With razor sharp weapons, they slashed and delivered such pain which had never been found Through echoes of pleading and lives quickly ending in puddles, thick red on the ground While women and children were herded like cattle in mass to the edge of the square With onyx eyes leering, midst snickers and cackles, their captors insanely did stare When on the horizon a light brightly shining, engulfing this nightmarish scene A porcelain stallion, its rider a shadow, a sword of the heavens did glean From steel hard as granite, angelic depictions, a handle of pure solid gold Once heard in a fable, when wizards were roaming such power, the stories foretold As swift as an arrow he entered the village, his steed all at one with the game With blade silver glistened, like lightning bolts flashing, igniting a righteous born flame Spinning and thrusting as if a tornado, a blur now incensed of the glow With whirlwind fury and dust clouded thunder, he dealt them a terrible blow The evil fueled army, beheaded and fallen, the villagers shouted and cheered When to their amazement, this heroic savior as quick as he’d come, disappeared So there is the story, a sword made in heaven is now part of history’s reign Along with the rider who wielded its honor, and hopes he will come back again
9/13/18 Written for the UNSHEATH YOUR SWORD Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Lawless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 11:45 PM
Bravo. Congrats on your well deserved win, Chris.
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September 24, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Thanks so much.
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September 23, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Chris, my belated congrats on your POTD honor and also your win in the contest. Amazing imagery, anapestic rhythm, and rhyme. Well done! Sandra :)
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September 24, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Thank you so very much Sandra
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Congratulations on you win, Chris, awesome write ...Eve
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September 24, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Thank you so very much Eve
Watson Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 2:19 AM
Congratulations, Chris. I enjoyed re-reading this wonderful adventure! Best wishes Wendy
Green Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Thank you so much Wendy
Ashley Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 10:23 PM
Returning with congratulations, Chris, on your excellent win with your stirring and evocative poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Green Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 10:54 AM
Thanks so very much Susan
Nicole Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Congratulations Chris, on this win. ~ Brandy
Green Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much Brandy for your knidness
Canerdy Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Absolutely magnificent--the story, the style, and the meter--anapestic, DONE SO WELL! CONGRATS--my newest favorite, Chris. Janice
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September 24, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so very much Janice
Cozart Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Very dashing, exciting story. Perfectly metered. Congrats.
Green Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thanks so much Dale
Lawless Avatar
September 22, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Love the story, the tercets and the staggered rhyme. Well done Chris. Thanks for entering the contest
Green Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thanks so much John. I am happy you liked it.
Nicole Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 7:20 PM
You certainly know how to tell a story. Congratulations Chris, on Poem of the Day!! ~ Brandy
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so very much Brandy for your kind thoughts.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 6:47 PM
This is magnificent Chris! It deserves to be honored with POTD! Congratulations. I have to fave this masterpiece that I am sure you put much work into. Bravo my friend!
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Thank you Connie, always, for being so kind to me
Sands Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations for POTD, Chris :)
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi for your kind comment
Williams Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 2:13 PM
A most energetic prose. I enjoyed. Congrats on your POTD.
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Thanks so very much for your kindness
Ashley Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 1:49 PM
Smooth rhythm and awesome rhymes inspirit the stirring and stunning imagery of your epic poem, Chris. Powerful and enthralling story-telling. Congratulations on your well deserved recognition with POTD honors with your exquisite piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:52 AM
Thank you so very much Susan. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one
Wanter Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 11:42 AM
Amazing - perfect poetry - different than I'm used to reading from you! What a grand metaphor. Big Congratulations!!!
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate your kindness
Duet Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 10:11 AM
Wow wow wow! Yes, I am wowed by this wonderful poem/story. No wonder it got POTD. I enjoyed it immensely, Chris. Congratulations.
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:51 AM
I am happy this one "wowed" you Carole. Thanks so very much. : )
Doll Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Wonderful rhyme and well done. Congratulations on your POTD, Chris.
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Thanks so very much Warren
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September 15, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Excellent penning Chris, truly amazing stuff! fully deserving POTD! BLessings, Gordon
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks so very much Gordon for your nice comment
Messina Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 7:38 AM
This is excellent Chris, I congratulate you on your very well deserved POTD. All the best...Charlie
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks so very much Charlie. I appreciate you stopping by.
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September 15, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Fantastical! Crazy good write my friend! Congratulations on POTD, my best to you in the contest, already a winner :)) xomo!
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thank you so very much Mo.
Warrior Avatar
September 15, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Back to Congrats!!! my friend on your POTD!...well deserved Chris...love & light...^WW^
Green Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Daniel Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Brilliance at its best, Chris:)
Green Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thank you Jo. I appreciate your nice comments always.
Warrior Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 7:05 AM
Awesomeness at its best my friend...a fav...love & light...^WW^
Green Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. Glad you liked it.
Watson Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 3:01 AM
Wow Chris! It took me back to Aslan and Narnia as well as the implied reference to Christ. What an amazing story teller and the rhythm so perfectly complemented the thematic content. Is there a name for this particular rhyme scheme? Thank you for such wonderful morning entertainment and food for thought! Wendy
Green Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Thank you so much Wendy, I am so happy you liked this one so much. As for a name for the rhyming scheme...there probably is but I have no idea what it would be. I just write what feels good. :)
White Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 12:42 AM
That's powerful writing my friend :) Good luck on your porcelain stallion, you'll be storming the contest.
Green Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Hey there my friend. Thanks so very much for stopping by and commenting on my poem.
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