"a Swipe of Fall"

Autumn swipes its hand

                     with such grace and color shown
  
                                                      while winter awaits...
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December 10, 2012 at 8:49 PM
yes I recall this one... winter here is still waiting for winter..LOL... xox~pd
Neels Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Awesome imagery Michael, love the first line. Love your haiku as well ;) love W
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Fantastic imagery, Michael..Thanks for the comments tonight. Have a great weekend! Peace, Audrey
Fraser Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Delicate use of the word swipe Michael, nicely written. It's as if nature takes her hand and changes Summer to Autumn with a brush of her hand. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Fantastic write on the change of seasons with good images, Michael
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October 1, 2010 at 1:23 PM
good write!! flows like smooth milk in hot coffee! good to the last drop!
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 12:17 PM
Great Haiku that you have penned here...It is very expressive and descriptive..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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October 1, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Am dreading Winter but the swipe of Fall I am happy to take.. nice expressive Haiku my White Night as your Jersey Girl is shoveling water today from all the torretial rains we had that I guess u got also..luv..be safe..
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 12:13 PM
I love your Haiku Michael. I stopped by to thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol
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October 1, 2010 at 11:12 AM
Good afternoon, Michael I do love the colors of Autumn. But, it is the most annoying season of all. My house is surrounded by trees- can you imagine all the leaves that make my back yard and house look not so pretty. LOL,..Okay Well maybe it's the raking we don't like. 4 lots of raking is a lot of beginning winter cleaning. I enjoyed your Haiku, also thanks for every thing,..always,..p.d.
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