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"a Swipe of Fall"

Autumn swipes its hand with such grace and color shown while winter awaits...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 8:49:00 PM

yes I recall this one... winter here is still waiting for winter..LOL... xox~pd

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/2/2010 9:13:00 AM

Awesome imagery Michael, love the first line. Love your haiku as well ;) love W

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/1/2010 9:58:00 PM

Fantastic imagery, Michael..Thanks for the comments tonight. Have a great weekend! Peace, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 10/1/2010 3:56:00 PM

Delicate use of the word swipe Michael, nicely written. It's as if nature takes her hand and changes Summer to Autumn with a brush of her hand. Have a wonderful weekend >> James

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/1/2010 1:39:00 PM

Fantastic write on the change of seasons with good images, Michael

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/1/2010 1:23:00 PM

good write!! flows like smooth milk in hot coffee! good to the last drop!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2010 12:17:00 PM

Great Haiku that you have penned here...It is very expressive and descriptive..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/1/2010 12:14:00 PM

Am dreading Winter but the swipe of Fall I am happy to take.. nice expressive Haiku my White Night as your Jersey Girl is shoveling water today from all the torretial rains we had that I guess u got also..luv..be safe..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2010 12:13:00 PM

I love your Haiku Michael. I stopped by to thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/1/2010 11:12:00 AM

Good afternoon, Michael I do love the colors of Autumn. But, it is the most annoying season of all. My house is surrounded by trees- can you imagine all the leaves that make my back yard and house look not so pretty. LOL,..Okay Well maybe it's the raking we don't like. 4 lots of raking is a lot of beginning winter cleaning. I enjoyed your Haiku, also thanks for every thing,..always,..p.d.