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"a Swing"

I hold the chains tight as I swing up to the sky with feet tucked under..

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James Fraser

Date: 8/23/2010 1:08:00 PM

A touch of self security holding onto the chains, nice one Michael >> James

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2010 12:38:00 AM

Good morning again Michael, nice fun little image here.. I feel the joyment of them legs tucked under.. while saying weee .. Loved your haiku..sorry I missed some of your poetry. I miss hanging here a the soup..take care,..LeeAnn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/14/2010 8:49:00 PM

Takes us back to sweet days of childhood when we thought we might actually reach that sky if we tried hard enough. Great haiku, Michael. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2010 6:00:00 PM

Nice use of images to create a picture, Michael

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/14/2010 10:37:00 AM

Love the image, I need to get on a swing again.. :) hope you are having a great weekend Michael

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/14/2010 8:34:00 AM

lovely image, nice senryu