"a Swing"

I hold the chains tight
                as I swing up to the sky
                                   with feet tucked under..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 1:08 PM
A touch of self security holding onto the chains, nice one Michael >> James
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August 15, 2010 at 12:38 AM
Good morning again Michael, nice fun little image here.. I feel the joyment of them legs tucked under.. while saying weee .. Loved your haiku..sorry I missed some of your poetry. I miss hanging here a the soup..take care,..LeeAnn
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August 14, 2010 at 8:49 PM
Takes us back to sweet days of childhood when we thought we might actually reach that sky if we tried hard enough. Great haiku, Michael. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Nice use of images to create a picture, Michael
Neels Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Love the image, I need to get on a swing again.. :) hope you are having a great weekend Michael
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August 14, 2010 at 8:34 AM
lovely image, nice senryu
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