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A Sweet Serenade

Is it your voice I hear or raindrops splashing a summer's garden refreshing butterflies. Was it your breath tickling my ear or the winds of May making flowers dance. Was it your smile or the sun all aglow, warming my heart to contentment, then resting at my feet. Is it love, dancing inside me or your kiss, touching every moveable part of me. I think it is all the pure wonder you bring to my life. 12:33 p.m. June 25, 2010 Cynthia

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2012 1:50:00 AM

A lovely poem - a love declaration - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 10/5/2012 8:11:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise, I am always happy to hear from you. Cynthia

Josh Kirkwood

Date: 10/4/2012 9:08:00 PM

a perfectly valid write. pleasant and moving, with vivid and colorful imagery and emotion. might want to fix the title though. it's spelled "serenade"

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 10/5/2012 8:13:00 AM

Hello josh! Thank you for your comment and the heads-up on the correction of "serenade"... Cynthia

Erin S

Date: 10/4/2012 8:58:00 PM

Lovely poem I enjoyed reading :)

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 10/5/2012 8:14:00 AM

What a delight to have you click in...Thank you for your comment. Cynthia