Alexis Y. Poet Lay

A Sweet Kiss-Lei

As we kiss underneath the stars
I floated pass Venus and Mars

Instantly I didn't want to land
I was glad that I took your hand

I've never known such sweet love
We seemed to fit just like a glove

My heart and soul had such a glow
I'm lucky to have a kind beau




December 29, 2019
Contest:Lay it on me-8x8 poetry contest
8 syllables per line 
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper January 16, 2020 at 10:36 PM Beautiful verse, Alexis, congratulations your win. Eve

Joseph May January 16, 2020 at 8:05 PM Wonderful write Alexis, Congrats on your win..

Gershon Wolf January 16, 2020 at 6:46 PM Back with congrats on your n the contest, Alexis! Cheers, Gershon

Heidi Sands January 16, 2020 at 10:07 AM Congratulations for your win Alexis :)

Charles Messina January 16, 2020 at 8:19 AM ..and indeed, lucky you are! Not easy finding that perfect soul. Wonderful write, Alexis. Well done! Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie Alexis Y. January 16, 2020 at 7:10 PM Hi Charles,You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Curtis Moorman January 16, 2020 at 7:14 AM Great write, Alexis! Jupiter and Saturn are next if you keep traveling like this!

Gershon Wolf December 31, 2019 at 2:50 PM That float past Venus and Mars must have been breathtaking! Gorgeous! :) gw

Vijay Pandit December 30, 2019 at 6:50 AM Lovely romantic tone and flow, Alexis--all the best my friend.

Sandra Adams December 29, 2019 at 8:52 PM nothing like a kiss that sends you floating in the depths of love... wonderful write Alexis... best wishes in the contest :) hugs